
Dear Teacher David, Thank you very much for your correction and warm encouragement ! Best regards, Hiroko

Thank you so much for your message. I learned conditional clause a few days ago. Then, I used it. Your correction made me understand more clearly. Thank you.

Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad to know you say “ the days of Lent” rather than Lent days,

Thank you, David!

Thank you for your response. I’ll be more careful about punctuations. Thank you for your corrections and helpful advice! I look forward to your response!

Thank you for your quick edtion and your last comment on “ cross into.” You are right. The car was still in the opposite line and there the car was collided with the van. I am glad I have learned that I should have said in this case “ the car crossed ‘into’ the opposite lane.

Thank you for reviewing my writing!

Thank you for your super quick edtion. I am glad to know you say “each item on the agenda.”

Thank you for your check and encourage me !

Thank you for checking my composition! I’m glad that I was able to write my picture depiction without making mistakes this time.

Thank you for your super fast edtion I like. Thank you for editing “the previous chapter on the last page of it” in a better and smoother way: “the previous chapter on its last page.”

Thank you for your corrections and kind advice! Your comments are always very helpful and easy to understand.

I appreciate you taught me English. I had never met a person like you in IDIY. You gave me a lot of useful sentences in the message! Thanks to your advice, I want to study English more harder. See you next time!

Thank you for your careful review of my writing and kind advice!

Thank you!