"The notion described above sounds odd, and it goes to show you how desperate the company really is." I like this. The sentence that I wrote was just like an elementary school kids' level, but yours sounds more like adults' I need to focus on the time, when the event happens in an article in question. "be worth" has to be followed by ~ing. I will remember that. "notion" "and more specifically," "heroic efforts" "a letdown" I like them. You kindly gave me two examples of sentence. That helps my study a lot. Thank you, I understand you have spent some time to write both. I'm always happy to study with you. See you Yoko
Thank you for checking my work.
Dear Ellie Thank you for correcting my sentence! Your correcting was very easy for me to understand. And also your massage made me want to go to Canada more and more! I’m going to study English harder . Thank you so much! Chipiro
Thank you very very much. I am old, so I thought he is young
I like your correcting because it gives me another saying which is more natural. Thank you !
Dear Teacher Ellie san Thank you for your nice corrections. #They have neither brains nor nerve systems, ++++++ I see. This kind of negative expression is difficult for me to come up with. In Japanese there is no such kind of expression. #These findings made me turn anew to plans with greater assurance and a confirmation of my own belief about them. #These findings make me look at plants with new eyes, sure of my own convictions and beliefs about them since they confirm my own theories. @Thank you for your understandings and nice sentences. I do not actually hear the ultrasonic sounds but sense them like an aura when meeting someone. I grow green leaves, Korean lettuce, and radish.
Thank for your advices, and your kind comments. It was difficult to express what I wanted to say. I should need to have more vocabularies. I think it was difficult to you as well to understand what I meant, but you understood it and gave me good advices. Also, you gave me tender comment about my disease. You cheered me up. Thanks very much. Have a nice day, too! Saori
Hi Ellie, Thank you for your very kind and helpful advice! I’m also grateful for sharing your scary experiences. King regards, ot
Hi Ellie, Thank you for your detailed advice!!
Hi,Ellie thanks for checking my composition. I really like your explanations and giving many examples. Thank you so much. See you again!
Dear Teacher Ellie san Thank you very much for your informative corrections. I will read them again later for my learning. > We are not inconvenienced in any way without it. →It is quite new to me to use "inconvenienced" this way as a verve. >she////got bitcoin for a colleague that was getting married as a wedding gift. >The Bitcoin made him more money-that was a couple of years ago- and in >order to thank them, he took them out for dinner. →I am interested in this way of using Bitcoin. It was with much witness together with a actual benefit. I respect this sense of witness and of enjoying a small fun. European people or western people are going ahead too far of me. They are civilizing people around them.
Thank you for your advices! It was nice to meet you, too. Your advices are tender and easy to understand. Also, your comment is very kind to me. I don't know many words that I can use . You told me words and expressions that I can't come up with. I'll try to use these. Thanks, again.
Thank you for your prompt response.
Thank you very much for reviewing my writing and sharing your thoughts!
Thank you for your kind teaching! I am so sorry for the too late response!
