Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for your interesting about our city Kanazawa, which is one of the popular travel destinations. My area is famous for a variety of delicious sea food like Hokkaido. https://www.nytimes.com/2016/01/24/travel/japanese-food-tokyo-restaurants.html?searchResultPosition=2 Many residents and companies rely on a travel industry, so they are happy to hear the pandemic ended after a long term of lockdown. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
It has rained a lot this winter in my city. It's strange that it rains instead of snowing in winter.
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
I like having guests, but it's hard to cook for them and clean up rooms after they have left.
Teacher Ellie_P I agree with the threat of jealousy from others. I always teach my sons to be decent and humble. When they unintentionally are forced to mention their advantages and achievements, I instilled that they should explain why they tried and how they make efforts a lot so that they can prevent being conceited. I believe that jealousy is the thing that we should be cautious about. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback with informative suggestions to improve my sentences!
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
I also have dreams of my dog that died many years ago. I feel a little happy then even if it's just a dream.
Thank you for your feedback. It was easy to follow and also helpful. I feel that it is still difficult for me to describe simple actions in English like “immerse myself in the water,” so I need more practice.
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand 'While one' is correct in the sentence. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P I understand that the Golden Rule of writing: Don't tell me, show me. I knew that the Seoul crowd crush that claimed the lives of 159 people, but I understand it is the result of Halloween festivities. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P I understand that 'bacteria' is in the plural form and 'bacterium' is in the singular form. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Yuzu isn't so expensive. It has an excellent smell.
Teacher Ellie_P As for recycling plastics, cans, and bins, the Japanese government orders local governments to run recycling industry publicly to collect these recyclable items. Thanks to the governmental instruction, all residents can put recycling into practice easily. Consequently, recycling has become a part of people's daily life nowadays in Japan. Since the eco-friendly business is difficult to produce profits, strong leadership of governments is indispensable to stop the deterioration of nature. Thank you for your collection that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
