Dear Ellie Thank you for your recommendation about my grammatical issues. I appreciate your advice and send natural English sentences to me. I also hope that the next year will improve compared to this year. Sincerely Bearmatsu
Are you feeling okay? It's hot recently, so be careful. I really like the way you fixed this sentence. "I'm swamped", "head for" and "afterward" are words I didn't know and they are really cool. Thanks again for all your help.
Tank you very much! It was difficult for me to want to tell you this time. I can do it next diary.
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for your feedback. I understood well how to use words correctly, such as target, eliminate, suicide, etc. It is very helpful for me. Also, I have never heard about the interesting idiom, "throw someone under a bus". I would like to use it in my further tasks. Avila is a cooler place because it is located at a high altitude. Please take care not to have a cold! I am enjoying the games of the Olympics! Sports give us a positive power and move our hearts. Have a wonderful time at Avila. Best regards, Orange0103
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments. I was interested in your experience that you told me. It was also good to know the phrase "a silver lining". It is tiring on a hot day. Take care.
Thank you for your helpful comment! I think I should have used the word "spoil" instead of "abolish." How do you think about it? Best regards,
Thank you very much, as always!
Dear Ellie Thank you very much for your corrections based on my structured sentences and for making some new sentences with the natural flow like natives. I understand your recommendation and I use these expressions to further improve my English. I hope to learn from you again soon. Sincerely, Bearmatsu
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for your feedback. I have been to Madrid in March and September for vacation and business respectively, but it was colder than Japan. I think there are bigger temperature differences in a year in Madrid than in Tokyo. However, since the rainy season ended two weeks ago, I have been getting tired of continuing hot and humid days, around 33 degrees. At last, Tokyo Olympics has started yesterday and I saw the opening ceremony on TV. Many Japanese people saw the games and ceremonies on TV because they are big entertainment during the COVID-19, though they are against having Olympics. In addition, many companies are hesitant to join it publically because it may ruin the company's brand. As a result, in my opinion, including various considerations and lacks of preparation, the opening ceremony was simple as never before. You have experience volunteering in a retirement home and know the suitable words. My grandmother is now in a senior care home but I could not meet her for over three years due to the COVID-19. Please take care of yourself during the extremely hot weather! Best regards, Orange0103
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you always give many examples!
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for your feedback. Also, I am sorry for this belated reply since I had a test for a generalist of Deep Leaning, which is quite difficult for me. Thanks to your explanation, I understand well how to use a comma correctly. At last, Tokyo Olympics will be held on this Friday. We are instructed to work from home during the Olympics by the government. If I could travel abroad now, I would like to go to Sicily and Sardinia. I would spend a relaxed time enjoying the sunset over the beautiful sea and the Idyllic countryside. Delicious foods like seafood, fresh cheese, and raw ham and wine would be fine. I hope you enjoy your vacation! Best regards, Orange0103
Hi Ellie_P Thank you for your corrections. They are very helpful. I learn a lot every time. I woke up by the chirping of cicada this morning. It's hot and humid. I 'd like to try the siesta soon. Have a lovely day! Best, Keiko23
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments.It was good to know how to use 'so that'. The Japanese rainy season is over and it's getting hotter and hotter. We have to be careful about heat stroke. Take care and have a nice day.
Your correction is always superb and I am very confident that you are the best teacher in IDIY.
Thank you very much for your useful advices!
