I hadn’t known mirabelles. Thank to you I could know the fruit. It is mouth-watering looks. I love to eat them.
Thank you very much
I liked how the teacher marked because it was easy to understand where I git wrong or did well.
Hello, Ms.Ellie! That is a really big earthquake you have experienced (in Greece)! Fortunately, I've only experienced false earthquakes in evacuation practices, but I've never really experience a real huge earthquake. When the tragedy in North Japan happened in 2011.3.11, I was still living abroad. But even for me, earthquake is a very close experience and a familiar phenomena. It gets scary when a small shake suddenly becomes a huge quake. Wish you a great weekend too! ~charcoal
Thank you very much for helpful advices.
"I am curious to know what this dictionary is like; for example, does it have a lot of pictures inside, where the girls can point to the picture and tell you the word? " It has many pictures inside. A lot of the subject of the example sentences are Disney characters such as Mickey or Minnie.
"I know it's a ritual, and a sacred time for the Japanese. Is it true?" I don't know if it's sacred or not, but many Japanese like to soak rather long in a bathtub.
"Does she go to her favorite salon only to have her hair shampooed? Or for a haircut?" They go there for haircut.
"I am not sure what he passed through the pipe." What he passed through the pipe is gas.
She can change the sentences both slightly and dramatically by using a wide range of vocabulary and I think she is really professional in writing. I learned a lot from what she corrected. Thank you very much, Ellie!
Yuka and Yu-chan have a 2-Park （Tokyo DisneySea & Tokyo Disneyland）Annual Passport. Mii-chan doesn’t need fee. Adult (Ages 18 & over) & Junior （Ages 12-17) ¥93,000 Child (Ages 4-11) ¥60,000. By the way, I love to see Cirque de Soleil!
She gave me clear advice and it is really helpful. From what she wrote, I've thought she is a intellectual person and a wonderful writer. I am very satisfied with her amendment. Thank you very much, Ellie.
“I don't understand why Yu-chan played alone during the first trimester.” Because she had preferred playing alone while imagining, to doing with someone. “do you feel she has become more sociable because she had been forced to play alone?” I think she has come to find delight in playing with friends.
“I remember this boy from another one of your diary entries. So, this is the same one? Taichi?” Yeah, that’s right. He is the one who participated in a radio calisthenics with our kids as follows; Yu-chan and Mii-chan have freedom to act as they please while both adults and elementary school students are engaged in calisthenics; they imitate the exercises in an awkward way, sit at a bench and just observe or play with Taichi.
Thank you for your editing and for your thoughts! I tend to use vague words and concepts sometimes. So, it's helpful to see how you mention real news topics in the sentences, and relate to the opinion. It's terrible to have a civil war in one's own country, and it takes a lot for a country and its citizens to heal and recover from those sufferings. I hope your parents be in peace. I can also search a bit more about peacemaking. Thank you, charcoal
