Thank you for your correction and your comments. Sorry that my sentense isn't clear. Actually, the dough did rise but it didn't become golden-brown. It was still white after 12 minutes passed. Though the color was not golden-brown, it was good and I enjoyed eating the bread.
Thank you for your correction and your comments. Sorry that my sentense isn't clear. Actually, the dough did rise but it didn't become golden-brown. It was still white after 12 minutes passed. Though the color was not golden-brown, it was good and I enjoyed eating the bread.
Thank you for your correction and comments. It was also really helpful to me that you gave me other possible sentences. The book about sweets gives me origins (when and where that sweet started), changes, when it first came to Japan, how it is loved in Japan and in the world nowadays. The sweets picked up in the book are tart, torte, mousse, chocolate, biscuit and so on. It may be better to use "stories" than "history", as you corrected. The book is really interesting!
Thank you for your edtion and comment on my essay. I am glad I have found out you also like Vincent Van Gogh. It is a famous story that he was influenced Japanese wood printings. I wondered if it is better to say “ bring back memories of ” than “it reminds me of” as you corrected it.
Thank you as always, Ellie!
I am happy with your check and alternative sentence. And Thank you very much for youre message. It is so nice to write in English and getting reply. Have a good day!
Peppa Pig World is located in the village of Ower, near Romsey, in Hampshire, England. The theme park has 70 rides and attractions. This is based on the children’s television series character.
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Hi, Ellie. thank you for your prompt advice!
Thank you for lots of expressions! You write beautifully. By your writing, I realized "as long as we are bound by believes about ..." is the sentences I was looking for.
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Hello, Ellie. Thanks very much for collecting my writing. I'm impressed with idea's of your father. Thank you for sharing your story. Regards, MIkako
Dear Ellie, Thank you for working with me. I appreciate your kind corrections, explanations and comments for my English writing. They are all useful for me. I hope to see you again. Take care and have a good day. Best regards, Yujin
