Hi Ellie, Thank you for revising the entry and for rephrasing each sentence. Actually, I'm gradually getting well and hope I retrieve my appetite soon. Have a great day! Many thanks, Kaori
Thank you for your message and review! I've heard of that there is the risk of infections of diseases, not only skin disease but virus like HIV and HVB, when you get it. You can avoid this by picking a tattoo shop that uses a new needle. Also there is the risk of septicemia if a person go in the ocean, which is a full of bacterias, before the skin heals completely, so refraining from sea after you get a new one and keep it clean for a week will keep you safe. By the way, I meant people who are not a member of mafia as "people in the clean business." Sorry to confuse you. Have a nice day and see you soon! Regards, 345
Hi Ellie, Thank you very much for your advice! And, I am interested your opinion. Best,
Thank you for your correction. I want to use the Present Continuous when I am describing a photo. Also, I want to use 'ed' and 'ing' well. Ibiza is very beautiful island, isn't it? I know for the first time. I hope you will go there. Best, aliceblue48074
Yes, I have been to the Bamboo Forest in Kyoto! Although I was not aware that the forest is listed as one of the best ones in the world, it was amazingly beautiful indeed. I think the area is now suffering from a sharp decline in tourists, which is so pity.
Thank you for all the corrections. I sometimes forgot "the". Students who graduate in the spring will have to wait until the fall to enroll if they want to go to an American university.
Hi Ellie, The answer for the question, "will you evacuate...," is it depends. I will take the evacuation order as seriously and eveluate every data I have, then decide what I will do. I have two cats, so I have to look for a place that accepts pets when I evacuate. Fortunately, my house places fairly good place, away from rivers and little higher than others, so I don't worry about typhoons so much. By the way, the preposition is making me nuts... Please be patient with me. I will work on it. Have a nice day! 345
Could you please let me know how I should write. I don't think that the reason of recent longevity is not medicine but medical including medicine, medical equipment, medical knowledge of doctors. So, what word should I use instead of medical, medicine?
Thank you so much. I enjoy reading the sentences you wrote for me. I hope having you soon. Yoko
Thank you for your kind comments!! I'll practice hard.
Fantastic! I definitely request you to check my essay soon. Thank you so much. Yoko
Hi Ellie, Thank you very much for your review and very interesting suggestions! Best,
Thank you very much for your detailed feedback as always. I think I became able to write longer sentences. On the other hand, these are becoming complicated as well, so I think I have to be more careful about it.
Hi Ellie, Thank you for your advice and perspectives for the recession! Have a great day. Best,
Thank you for your tentative corrections! Your advice is always meaningful for me. I will try to make more precise writing. Best regards.
