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Dear Ellie, Thank you for your detailed comments on my text as always. As you guessed, I wanted to express that with large companies, since so many people work in them, we get to see our work as a whole, so our work does not stand out more because we are just a small part of a very big machine if we are working for large companies Yes, currently, graduating students enjoy workers' market and become picky. They are so lucky! I am looking forward to having your lesson again soon! Best regards, Tinkle
Dear Teacher Ellie-P Thank you so so much!!! I was so excited and moved because you taught me a lot, furthermore you appended another example sentence. I’m so happy. I want to be a person who can write an intelligent and sophisticated sentences in the future. Thank you!! Kind regards, Pasery
Hello It is really my pleasure to read your alternatives I already sent such a message before, but I feel great whenever I read your sentences. Thank you Best Regards, Hiroko
Dear Ellie_P, Thank you very much for the corrections and alternative expressions. >'If I were to marry him' means you are not yet married to him. >However, she is married to him. Firstly, I didn't understand what you mean here, but now, I guess I could get the point! Since he is not single anymore, especially with the main person of this topic, it makes confilict if "I were to marry him". And now, thanks to you, I come to know marry never takes the preposition "with". >iinherited this culture, >is part of that culture I liked those expressions that have never come to my mind. I want to be able to utilize all the expressions you suggested. Will try in the next opportunity. Thank you also for the input about the background of this topic. Reading your info., I think she did rather good thing for the tribe. There is no reason for her to be accused, right? And I enjoyed reading your life in Spain. Once, I have been to Spain more than 20 years ago. I loved all the cities I visited. Delicious food, beautiful towns with white walls, the air that brings the smell of orange, and the people were nice. If I live abroad, Spain is one of my canditate countries. Thank you as always! I will soon write you again! Best regards, Asouka
Thank you so much Ellie. I really like your corrects using by 2 different type of sentences, especially second sentence. I hope my writings are getting better soon.
Dear Ellie, Hello! Thank you very much for your advice. I always look forward to receiving your comments on my English. Although I am not a good writer of English yet, I'll try my best to write English better. Thanks again. Best wishes, myamakawa
Hi, Ellie, Thank you for your detalied and careful comments. As for "reworded", it is my typo. I meant "rewarded" as you suggested. Sorry for confusing you. I will learn to use commas more effectively in my writing. I am a little confused about the usage of commas because some teachres sometimes delete commas in my writing. It will take some time to get the hang of it, but I will do! I am looking forward to having your lessons again. Best regards, Tinkle
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Dear Ellie, Thank you for your comments on my writing. Many people who want to immigrate to Japan assert that they are facing hardships to live in their countries for political reasons even though their actual reason is to seek better lives for an economic perspective. It is true to a certain level that their economically challenged life is caused by the political measures conducted by the current government in their country. However, we cannot regard them as refugees only with this fact because we have a concreate definition of “refugee” of person who are suffered or most likely to be suffered from persecution because of race, religion, or politics. I just wanted to express this idea in my writing within the limited number of characters. I am sorry for confusing you by my halfway and poor explanation. Best regards, Tinkle
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for lots of corrections, advices and ideas for alternatives. I guess I gave you so much work, sorry.... I tried to put much things in such a short sentence, thus I focused on how much I could cut to make it short, that caused me to know my wrong understandings this time. I tried to use participial construction and semicolon, but it seems it didn't work well. (Another teacher also told me that the phrase needed subject) I may ask about these gramatical questions on the next chance. This time, I could find some wrong expressions I have ever used. (e.g. found being pregnant, for going picnic, etc.) I appreciate you for the detailed corrections. Thank you very much! Have a good day to you too. Asouka
