I separated my rhyme and daily entry as you had suggested. Thank you for your suggestion!
Thank you very much for correcting my English. Again, I'm so happy that you are back! You are the best.
Thank you very much for the correction and paraphrasing my sentences. I highly appreciate leaning many different phrases from you. Regards, Taki
Thank you very much for your advices. These days, it's very difficult to get your lessons as you seem to accept quite few requests. I'm really looking forward to learning from you again.
Tnank you for your correction. the expression 'see the writing on the wall' was new to me. As you wrote some other ways to express what I wrote, it became good study for me. I look forward to working with you again.
Thank you for your feedback. I am sorry not to explain detail due to words limitation. According to the article, the store named Wefood sells goods that regular supermarkets can no longer sell due to overdue ‘best before’ dates, incorrect labels or damaged packaging. The also confirmed that products found in Wefood are still edible and safe to consume according to the Danish food legislation. I am attaching URL, so please take a look if you are interested in! Thank you! Jun https://donate.danchurchaid.org/wefood
Whenever you want anyone to show my daily entry, you let them show it. It's my pleasure!
Thank you for your revision! Actually, I watch the movie during the flight to Japan. Thanks, again!
You were right. It was the same as the onsen. I read your son's story while enjoying. Thanks for your writing. Japanese style bathtub is different from other countries' like you wrote. Most of Japanese like talking a bath while soaking up their shoulders. That is why our bathtub is deeper than other countries'. Have a nice weekend! Best, Masahiro
Thank you for your reviewing and useful comments!
Hi Ellie, Thank you very much for your quick replay, as usual! You always impress me by googling about the topic. Your comments base on the search is truly helpful, as I can find out what else I could have written in my writing. I'd like to keep sending my writing to you as far as you are available!! Best Regards, Motoshi
Hi Ellie_P, Thank you for your correction. I could expand my vocabulary. You showed two sentences. It was very helpful. Thanks, Yasuo
Hi Ellie, Thank you for your correction and advice, which are very helpful. The use of articles is indeed very difficult for me, as we don't use articles in Japanese language. Nevertheless, compering with other languages I have studied before, such as German or French, articles in English seems to be less complicated. I'll just keep writing with IDIY till I can use articles naturally! Best Regards, Motoshi
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for your comments, which were very nice! Yes, as you mentioned, 16 personality test is same as Carl Jung’s and Isabel Briggs Myers’ personality test. This test was translated into various languages, very interesting! It is nice to know we are peaceful diplomat type (INF-). Hope to enjoy today.
Hi Ellie_P, Thank you for your correction. You showed two corrections at every sentence. It was very useful. Thanks, Yasuo
