Great feedback! Thanks
Dear Teacher Ellie, Thank you for your nice comments. And, I always appreciate that some other expressions are added, even when my sentence is perfect. Have a nice day! Best, Yukibaseball12
Thank you so much for feedback. The way you correct my writing is really helpful!!
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for your nice comments. I also agree with your opinion. I am glad to learn "Puffing off" which is the new phrase for me because I always use 'smoking' instead of the phrase. Have a nice weekend, too! Best, Yukibaseball12
Thank you for improving my sentence. getting my condition is no problem, because I want to write some topics referenced to health. That's why the topics I am going to image of writing. please check out my comments. I am very grateful to improve my sentence accurately. thank you. bye
Thank you!!
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for your comments. I always forget adding comma before conjunction such as because. I will care for it from now on. Have a nice day! Best, Yukibaseball12
Please give my warmest wishes to Mii-chan for a belated Happy birthday! I wish her lots of happiness and joy. Thank you so much!
thank you for your correction! It helped me to understand.
I drink vegetable juice a few times a week. Thank you so much for your useful comments!
Thank you very much! I don't like waiting, but sometimes I have to do that. Your sentences are really helpful for me!! Have a good day.
I regarded beer o'clock as It’s the right time of day to start drinking beer. It usually indicates the end of working hours, but for some people, it may be at any time of the day. thank you for improving my writing.
Thank you for correcting my sentence. I will practice how to use something like a noun and try not to repeat the same word too many time.
Thank you for improving my writing skill. I want you to keep improving next time. I am eager to improve my English skill. Because I am going to study abroad to study computer science at USA university. I am very grateful to you.
Thanks for your help! The article that you put was something a little shocking but very thought-provoking. See you next time:) Mie
