Hello, Ellie. How are you doing? I'm so happy to see you here again. Thank you for the amendments you made on my submission. All of them make perfect sense to me. On the top of that, you are kind enough to write me two optional sentences, which are not only providing me other choices of wording and sentence structures, but also, letting me clearly understand what the sentences in my essay mean. You pointed out my word mistake "challenging people." In addition, you wrote me a story about your aunt. Thank you. Bye for now, hoping to see you soon again. Yoko
I intended that "the number of them" meant "the number of cafes". I wrote the confusing sentence. And like you said, the situation of people with mental illnesses is terrible in Japan.
Thank you.
When I eat pears, I usually eat them without the peel. Next time, I'll try to eat them with the peel.
Dear Ellie Thank you for your message. Which it always gives me motivated to keep my learning. I’d imagine businessman in Madrid are into drinking or enjoying time with their family after work. Enjoy your day!!
I couldn't stand up on the day of the delivery. The next day, I got better and could stand up.
Thank you for correcting my essay. You offered me a lot of alternative expressions, and they are very useful. I will try to use them in the future.
Hi Ellie: Thank you for working for my entry and giving me your concern. As I wrote, I'm feel totally fine, but I'm off until today to cure perfectly. I am sorry that you also got Covid-19 and had hard symptoms. You must have had a tough time. I enjoyed reading your corrections and explanations. They are very helpful for me to learn about writing. I hope you have a great weekend. Best regards, M-yoshiro
Thank you.
Thank you so much for your corrections as always! Thanks to the corrections, I’m learning how to express my thoughts more naturally. I appreciate it very much. Take care of yourself and have a nice day, Tomoko
My dog likes to go and sit on his lap. He is a small-size dog.
I wiped the floor with a rag to earn pocket money when I was a child.
I wanted to say," I'll eat this meal." But, I understood that "get" is strange.
Thank you so much for your corrections and message. You let me notice careless mistakes of my writing. Thank you all the time! You always help me make my writing better. I would like to use the way you taught me. ‘Sekai no ehon gakatachi’ means ‘picture book authors of the world ’ in Japanese. I don’t have that book but I guess it includes not only Chihiro’s artworks but also that of other picture book artists from around the world. Thanks again and have a wonderful day! Best wishes, Tomoko
This was another incident. I should not use "So". Thank you for correcting my sentences. I'm sorry to hear about your car accident. That sounds very painful.
