I don't mind for the delay in receiving your correction at all. Instead I prefer receiving your correction of being careful especially adding another sentence like native one。 what is this book about? the song is good. I also write lyrics of musical. My two novels become musical. one is Hanaikusa, Please see the following https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCbyhj0Y9oE https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LcOAr22aQyk please enjoy.
Thank you for your advice, Ellie! I learn a lot from your feedback! Thank you very much. Rika
Thank you Elle for your assistance! "Most journals advise authors not to start any sentence with an abbreviation or a number. " I didn't know that! Thank you! Rika
thank you. your parent ran the barber as well. Now we have common feeling. I read your introduction saying that you published a book and are preparing second book. Please let me know what it is. Best regards
thank you. We also use the ward "achilles" as the weakest point. I read up about achilles and Troy war, and what I couldn't believe is that the troy war have lasted more than 10 years, which is incredibly so long. I n comparison with Japan's war, even the biggest battle in Japan in Warring states period "sekigahara war" lasted only 6hours. The battle, which 80,000 vs 80,000 warriors, started from dawn and ended just noon and ended the loser 10,000 in death and winner lost 7,000 in death. That war concluded the capital moved from West to East which is Tokyo. Best regards
Thank you for your reviews and kind messages!
Thank you for your informative comment. Perhaps the number of very poor people is smaller in Japan than in other countries, as you said. By the way, I often see young foreigners from Asian countries work in the stores and small restaurants around me. I have heard that they are paid less than the standard. It must be exploitation.
I always appreciate your helpful comment. In our city, Osaka, the number of public toilets is small, but all the station restrooms in the subways have been recently renewed and become beautiful. I usually use the subways to go to work, so I am very pleased about that. The western style with the so-called "Washlet" has been normal in new restrooms in Japan. By the way, we Japanese usually call restrooms as "TOIRE", and we might have some difficulty to imagine them from the words of "restroom" or "bathroom". Best regards.
Thank you for your informative comments! I regret to say that I know next to nothing about the social situation in the Philippines. In our country Japan, Journalists usually try to reveal political and social unfairness and we should welcome their activity. However, at the same time, we should be careful about the truth of their information. Best regards.
Thank you for your attentive work. I'm very sorry that my writing was not clear understanding. I didn't read that published paper but I am skeptical about the results introduced in this subject. To be honest, I didn't have any consistent ideas about this subject so that my writing was confusing. I wrote about the digestive system because there was the context of that in the offered text. I can understand that people without any purpose would tend to have desperate eating and drinking habits which could make digestive disorders. However, it sounds for me too eccentric to say having purposes makes longevity. I think such a concept would be accepted for public people easily, but we should be careful with the background logic. Best regards.
Thank you!
Thank you for always helping me.
Dear Ms Ellie_P, Thank you for your feedback! Your alternative sentences are always helpful to understand how you would express things naturally.
Thank you for your rapid and attentive comment! Best regards.
Thank you for the detailed explanation. I am really excited to read it. I try to make sentences, being careful whether to use singular nouns or plural nouns.
