I didn't recognize my habit to include two things at once in one sentence. By the way, I used "a carrot of it" as "a reward of the work". Both "carrot" and "it" are abstract, so I have to make my words clearer. Thank you.
Thank you for correcting my essay, and I am sorry for my late reply. I learned a lot from the alternative expressions you taught me. I will try to use these phrases.
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for your feedback and message. Since I have been busy last 2 weeks, I am sorry for this belated reply. I remember that I visited Madrid just 4 years ago. As you mentioned, the weather was very nice. I hope to go there again in a near future. Have a good night! Best regards, Orange0103
Thank you so much. I musunderstanded the usage of the word "because". Your indications and explainations about grammar always make great sense to me.
Thank you for your feedback and corrections with informative tips. This exercise contains unfamiliar situation for me, but good to try to describe the challenging item. Tomoo
Thank you for corrections. Your descriptions are easy to understand and empower me.
Thank you very much! You always tell me another sentence, so it is helpful for me.
Dear Teacher Ellie san I am very glad to read the below you kindly wote: "Your writing is getting better and better all the time. I am honest in my evaluation and very proud of your progress." ,which I owe to your wonderful corrections. Thank you very much. … In Japanese, "Copernican Change " is used as a figurative expression to show a drastic change of a basic principle similar to that from the geocentric model to the heliocentric one. ……
Thank you for correcting my sentences! My sentence was wrong, so you misunderstood. My daughter left home in the morning and came back in the evening like every day.
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for your feedback and message. I am glad to hear from you that you went back to Madrid safely. When I was on travels, I often missed taking photos because I was addicted to the scenery. Therefore, I often regret not taking beautiful photos. Since I finished the second vaccination, I would like to go to travel somewhere. Have a good weekend! Best regards, Orange0103
Thank you very much for your review. I understand how to use countable nouns in my sentence.
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed reading your comments.
Thank you very much.
Dear Teacher Ellie_P san Thank you very much for reading my text again. >Thus, you follow the Golden rule of writing: don't tell me, show me. = This is a Golden advice that enlightens me exactly so that I can avoid being vague.
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for your feedback. I hope you enjoy the remaining days in Greece. In Tokyo, even in early September, it is much cooler than usual. It is like in the end of October. This may be affected by climate change. Fortunately, I completed the second vaccination without big side effects. I am glad to hear you did. I would like to keep practice. Best regards, Orange0103