"I know it's a ritual, and a sacred time for the Japanese. Is it true?" I don't know if it's sacred or not, but many Japanese like to soak rather long in a bathtub.
"Does she go to her favorite salon only to have her hair shampooed? Or for a haircut?" They go there for haircut.
"I am not sure what he passed through the pipe." What he passed through the pipe is gas.
She can change the sentences both slightly and dramatically by using a wide range of vocabulary and I think she is really professional in writing. I learned a lot from what she corrected. Thank you very much, Ellie!
Yuka and Yu-chan have a 2-Park （Tokyo DisneySea & Tokyo Disneyland）Annual Passport. Mii-chan doesn’t need fee. Adult (Ages 18 & over) & Junior （Ages 12-17) ¥93,000 Child (Ages 4-11) ¥60,000. By the way, I love to see Cirque de Soleil!
She gave me clear advice and it is really helpful. From what she wrote, I've thought she is a intellectual person and a wonderful writer. I am very satisfied with her amendment. Thank you very much, Ellie.
“I don't understand why Yu-chan played alone during the first trimester.” Because she had preferred playing alone while imagining, to doing with someone. “do you feel she has become more sociable because she had been forced to play alone?” I think she has come to find delight in playing with friends.
“I remember this boy from another one of your diary entries. So, this is the same one? Taichi?” Yeah, that’s right. He is the one who participated in a radio calisthenics with our kids as follows; Yu-chan and Mii-chan have freedom to act as they please while both adults and elementary school students are engaged in calisthenics; they imitate the exercises in an awkward way, sit at a bench and just observe or play with Taichi.
Thank you for your editing and for your thoughts! I tend to use vague words and concepts sometimes. So, it's helpful to see how you mention real news topics in the sentences, and relate to the opinion. It's terrible to have a civil war in one's own country, and it takes a lot for a country and its citizens to heal and recover from those sufferings. I hope your parents be in peace. I can also search a bit more about peacemaking. Thank you, charcoal
I don't know if Yu-chan is able to understand her painting was voted as one of the best artistic creation. When I praised her in front of the painting, she hugged Mii-chan while laughing out loud. "Please convey my best wishes to her for many more great creations!" Thank you so much! Have a nice month!!
Hello, Ms.Ellie! I came back to review my old tasks. Neither could I imagine our real-life future with clones!! There was a comic made in 1950s Japan, called "Astro boy". It had been very popular till 21st c, and I've read it when I was in primary.The hero is a robot which (who?) was created as a replica of a robot engineer's son, who passed away. So the "cloning" idea is not new. But the hero robot is abandoned because he couldn't replace the presence of the son, & I think that's rational. We cannot replace anyone with the AI or technology. I've read that industrial firms are not as willing in advancing researches on "human cloning". Perhaps there is a sense of morality. Wish you a lovely day in Madrid, or else! Warm regards, charcoal
Thank you for checking my English sentense. It is very useful for me to develop my English.
Hello Ms.Ellie. Sorry, I might have misdirected you by mistaking the word "news" for an "article". Nothing of a serious event happened. I just read an article about cyber crimes. You are a very lucky person to have a computer professional as a friend! Otherwise, we would have to tackle most of these issues on our own. Hope you had a good weekend! Warm regards, charcoal
What could they buy and for what purpose? They can buy breakfast or so. The salesperson is also a Filipino so they can talk with her using mother language. That’s why, the shop might be a gathering space for them.
“an association without lucrative purpose” I mean “a nonprofit organization.”
