Hi Ellie: Thank you for your corrections and message. You let me notice careless mistakes of my writing, Thank you all the time! I'll try to improve my skill. Your tips also help me to make my writing more dramatic, I would like to use them well. I hope you have a nice day! Please take care about a high temperature. Best regards, Ryozy
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Thanks for reviewing my writing! Taking your advice, I am going to practice writing more and more. See you someday.
Hi, Ellie Thank you for your correction of my writing. I was taking about plastic packaging waste on a per capita, but USA was the top and Japan was the second. I'm sorry it didn't make sense well. I appreciate you that you showed me natural sentences in your way. But I could not disappointingly find the verb of " the key " in the following sentence. It was too difficult for me... " The key to reducing this amount involved being accountable, which applies not only to each person but also mostly to companies that need to stop or reduce the amount of plastic they put into the market and think in terms of repairing and reusing instead." Other than that, overall, I caught a lot of new vocabulary and expressions from you. Thank you. Yukiko
Thank you for your advices, Ms. Ellie! It’s very interesting that each country has its own culture about the national holiday. I confused “reasonable” with “low-priced”. My intentions are as follows. Uniqlo’s clothes are low-priced and good-quality. It can exist with many tips to get good fabric cheaply. If the prisoner’s training company knew at least one of their tips, the training system would be improved more. And, I think that big companies are recently expected to what they return to society, how they contribute to people. They need to think about not only a profit for their shareholders but also a society as a whole. They teach some tips, as a result, they indirectly help prisoner’s social rehabilitation. Wishing you a nice weekend!
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If orisoners are taught properly and practice sewing many times, the quality of the uniforms may become better.
Thanks for reviewing my writing! I was able to learn new expression “bump into”. I am going to practice writing more and more. See you someday!
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Thank you for your advices! Bathhouses and onsens are very similar, but bathhouses are more reasonable and familiar than onsen. We can find bathhouses anywhere in our town. Bathhouses use just hot water. Onsens are a bit rare, because they are hot spring flow and contain some natural mineral ingredient which make our skin smooth. So we sometimes go a long way for onsens.
Thanks for reviewing my writing. This topic is very difficult to me, but your message encourages me very much. I am going to learn English more and more. See you someday!
