Dear Teacher Ellie, Hi! Thank you for your comments and examples. The example on the third sentence seems to be more attractive than mine. I will make efforts and try to write such an expression. Today, Japan emperor’s enthronement parade was held in Tokyo, because Japan emperor was changed this year. Many people saw the parade and celebrated. Have a nice rest of weekend! Best, Yukibaseball12
Dear Teacher Ellie, Hi! Thank you for your comments. Having a hamster was a good experience for me, but I don't have any pets after that. In fact, I don't want any pets now, because I feel hurt when it died. Unfortunately, I have a allergy on bogs and cats, although they are pretty cute. Have a nice day! Best, Yukibaseball12
Thank you very much always!
Thank you very much for your advice!
Dear Teacher Ellie, Hi! Thanks for replying me. Oh, I’ve never eaten the tail of the bull, but I guess it is hard. I understood that the first sentence should use past tense. Have a good day! Best, Yukibaseball12
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for giving me nice comments. It is such a very complicated story! It was so hard just because the last name is changed. I watched about this topic on TV last night, and many women always keep the certificates to prove their maiden name. Finally, the residential cards with both husband's name and her maiden name can be written as of Nov. 5th! I hope other certificates such as a driver license and a passport will be the same. Have a nice day! Best, Yukibaseball12
Thank you very much! I agree with your opinion. My parents have 5 cats, and I have grown up with cats. I understand the pros and cons of having pets. Have a good day!
Thanks for making my essay more natural, and encouraging words to me :) I thought after writing this, I should have taken a picture of the assembled patchwork tree to show you, haha. Have a wonderful week. See you Mie
Thanks for your warm comments over my feelings in my essay. I always enjoy reading your messages :) Take care, see you soon. Mie
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for revising my sentences. In fact, the debris issue in outer space is interested for me. I am researching how to tackle space debris in order to protect operating satellites as my Ph.D. assignment. By the way, it is the first day of November. Passing time is too fast. Many young people with costume enjoyed the Halloween in Tokyo yesterday, although I didn't attend it. Best, Yukibaseball12
Thank you for your feedback. You provide much more alternatives than other teachers, which is really helpful to me. Also, your simple but sufficient feedback encourages me to go over grammatical rules and vocabs. P.S. The daily tasks usually give two or three questions and it is really hard to mention all the given questions within 100 words.
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for replacing your comments against my sentences! I am also jealous when I read the your friend's story... By the way, it is getting cold here. Maybe, winter is coming soon. Have a nice day! Best, Yukibaseball12
Thank you for your corrections and explanations!
Thank you!
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for your comments. I understand what is happened. I am glad to give me comments when you have time, because I don't harry up. That is right! Each country has its pros and cons. I also want to visit your country and wonderful traditional places. Have a nice weekend! Best, Yukibaseball12
