Thank you so much Ellie. I really like your corrects using by 2 different type of sentences, especially second sentence. I hope my writings are getting better soon.
Dear Ellie, Hello! Thank you very much for your advice. I always look forward to receiving your comments on my English. Although I am not a good writer of English yet, I'll try my best to write English better. Thanks again. Best wishes, myamakawa
Hi, Ellie, Thank you for your detalied and careful comments. As for "reworded", it is my typo. I meant "rewarded" as you suggested. Sorry for confusing you. I will learn to use commas more effectively in my writing. I am a little confused about the usage of commas because some teachres sometimes delete commas in my writing. It will take some time to get the hang of it, but I will do! I am looking forward to having your lessons again. Best regards, Tinkle
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Thank you for correcting my answer. See you again.
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Dear Ellie, Thank you for your comments on my writing. Many people who want to immigrate to Japan assert that they are facing hardships to live in their countries for political reasons even though their actual reason is to seek better lives for an economic perspective. It is true to a certain level that their economically challenged life is caused by the political measures conducted by the current government in their country. However, we cannot regard them as refugees only with this fact because we have a concreate definition of “refugee” of person who are suffered or most likely to be suffered from persecution because of race, religion, or politics. I just wanted to express this idea in my writing within the limited number of characters. I am sorry for confusing you by my halfway and poor explanation. Best regards, Tinkle
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for lots of corrections, advices and ideas for alternatives. I guess I gave you so much work, sorry.... I tried to put much things in such a short sentence, thus I focused on how much I could cut to make it short, that caused me to know my wrong understandings this time. I tried to use participial construction and semicolon, but it seems it didn't work well. (Another teacher also told me that the phrase needed subject) I may ask about these gramatical questions on the next chance. This time, I could find some wrong expressions I have ever used. (e.g. found being pregnant, for going picnic, etc.) I appreciate you for the detailed corrections. Thank you very much! Have a good day to you too. Asouka
I really appreciate you, teacher Ellie-P! You introduced me many other phrases.They are colorful, l like "glowing" for example, and l laughed when l checked the meaning of "bombard" in my dictionary ツ See you soon again!
Thank you very much, Ellie! I learned a lot! kayo
Thank you so much.
Dear Ellie, Thank you for your careful amd detailed comments on and your example sentences in your words for each one very much. From your comments, I recognize my bad habits in writing, and from your examples, I can learn how the natives construct the sentences in order to express the same things. How helpful your comments are! I am looking forward to taking your lessons again! Best regards, Tinkle
Thank you Ellie. Your correction always really stimulative and helpful to learn not only English writing skills, but also learn a lot of things. Always I write down your sentences to my notebook to capture them. Again, thank you and have a nice weekend.
