Thank you so much for your correction!! Your correction helps me a lot!
Hi! Thank you for correcting my practice email. I didn't know that I can't use sincerely with the case I don't know their names. Thank you!
Hi teacher Ellie My granpa passed away last September still whenever I visit my granma's house, I feel so sad not to have him on his favorite sofa ! I feel sorry for your loss, too.
Hi thank you for letting me know about Mr Ted Turner ! I will check him out !
Hi teacher Ellie ! I am happy we're both lucky to have supportive and understanding fathers !
Thank you for your message. I don't mind that you could not write back to me and am delighted that just only you mentioned you have read my message. I just met her only twice on the day of shooting film and preview film. Since I just sold the right to film based on my novel to a producer, I don't know whether she even remember me or not. The film is as follows. https://movies.yahoo.co.jp/movie/344304/ Since the taste is so different from other ones, I used a pen name for this novel. Although Nozomi Sasaki is so thin, on the other hand, obese female model and comedian is now got popularity and lasted more than a decade. https://www.instagram.com/watanabenaomi703/?hl=ja By the way, today's essay is about a well known film producer. best regards
Thank you for your message. Since I would like to write some more essay about this topic, I would write two more days continuously from today. The symbol of women's beauty has changed a lot from when Japan's history has got started. About a thousand years ago, obesity is the most beautiful because everyone was starving. This sense of beauty is the same as present north Korea. After this, as you can see the Japan's Earthen figurine, female that has big hips is thought most beautiful because that images give a birth for lots of children. Because in unstable time ,especially during wartime, it is natural that parents lost child. Yet, at present, those kind of beauty is completely out of fashion. Conversely, present beauty is thin. What's more, talkative, bright, wise, sense of humor, and so on.
Thank you very much for your detailed feedback as always, and also for new words like "crystallize". I have not come across this word so far, even though we pronounce "crystal glass" as it is in Japanese(!)...I think this verb is very useful and would like to use it when I come back to the office, finishing maternity leave. As for artists, as I wrote above, it is difficult for them for make a living especially in Japan, but I saw an artist on a TV program, saying that this job is not lucrative but doing something I like is much valuable than money.
Dear Ellie I'm sorry to reply to your message late. Thank you for your correction. You said, “What is your opinion about the riots? Are they justified? ” In my opinion, the riots shouldn't be justified. Because I remembered an idea that an eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind. I thought the riots might make new riots. Wishing you and your friend the best
I appreciate your careful corrections of my confusing writing. In the 2nd sentence, I wanted to say that I caught some feelings of blaming in this subject. Maybe, the writer of this theme has a strong blaming feeling on the officers' behavior, but I think there might be some reasons for such aggressive attitudes.
Thank you for your helpful corrects. And I also appreciate your cheerful comment! Best regards.
Thank you very much for your detailed feedback as always. I believe it took a plenty time for you to correct my writing because I made a lot of mistakes... I reviewed your comments one by one and took notes on points that I have to be careful or your sample writings. I did not know that you have raised your son since he was three months old without your husband support. I think how strong your are, because I have become aware how hard childcare is, having given birth to my first child.
Thank you for your feedback. I leanred what is lack on my email.
Dear Ellie, Thank you for your great advice. I can’t tell you how much your feedback means. Enjoy the rest of the day! Best regards, Silver97175
In reply to this message, I have just written an essay of June 14th . The reason why Kabuki is facing a difficulty is not the financial aspect but the novel Corona virus. Actually, every program, 4times a day and 365days a year, 2000 seats of all rograms are fully occupied. https://www.kabukiweb.net/theatres/kabukiza/information/index.html It is not easy to purchase Kabuki tickets even to enthusiasts. But suddenly the programs were suspended and no plan to reopen. Best regards.
