Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I am skeptic that social media companies pay attention enough to protect their users. Although C.E.O of these platforms, such as Mr. Mark Elliot Zuckerberg, earn huge amount of wealth, they are not cautious to support their users. Therefore, I don't utilize such platforms, instead I join a mobile messanger application "Line" that a reliable Japanese company manages. LINE is warning users of dating services and risky smartphone apps, and is restricting the use of some features for the users who are under the age of 18. Children and juveniles are vulnerable to dangers on the internet, so governments and companies should implement regulating social media platforms. Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I understand that shrink fits to mean the decrease of pension allowance. As aging society is now the most serious concern in Japan, the Japanese government should offer a variety of countermeasures that help people. Currently, having good health is an individual matter whether or not ones pay attention to. However, concerning our gloomy future, the government should provide more incentives as people will have more healthy habits. While the government delay the starting age of pension, it should be a virtue for them to be able to work in old age by doing health promotion in their middle ages. It is an effective way that people will have healthy and productive aging so as to sustain Japanese society. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. Apart from ilicit drugs, side effects of smoking is not obvious in a short duration but it damages people's body little by little. Before WHO cleared the negative impact of cigarette in 1980s, people didn't believe that smoking was very harmful. However, scientific reports cleared that smoking clearly increase of the number of premature deaths. Thanks to their effort, it is common for people to accept non-smoking society nowadays. As ilicit drugs were eradicated, I believe that smoking ban will be realized. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. Personally, I didn't have opportunity to look into a recruitment agency to find me a better job. Although I change workplace once, I found new workplace while using a connection of my friend. Since new staff are the people who are familiar with my friend, I easily got along with new environment. Changing jobs are not always easy, so false comments may cheat the people who seek new ones. At least, Google should have deleted the comments that may be one-sided views. Thank you for comments that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. Thanks to advent of Mr. Shohei Ohtani, television news programs have reported his daily result. Currently, there is no day that don't broadcast his daily things. I feel that many Japanese people encourage themselves to inspire for their work and study while watching how Mr. Ohtani plays baseball well. I think that it is a great encouragement for me to see Japanese who can do well to the world. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. According to news reports, the original illustrations for anime films will be created by hand drawing. It takes 28,800 original drawings to create an hour-long anime work. As painters working in the anime industry want to create pictures that are as beautiful as possible, the amount of work naturally becomes enormous. As a result, it has become their daily routine to work about 12 or 14 hours a day. Making beautiful pictures ultimately leads to overwork unintentionally. Therefore, the government should try to improve the working environment by putting regulations in place. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Thank you for your advice! I will recommend herbal tea and counting numbers to my father.
Teacher Ellie＿P Thank you for kind words as always. The Osaka/Kansai Expo will be held from April 13th to October 13th next year with the theme of "Designing a Future Society that Brightens people's Life." According to news articles, approximately 160 countries, regions and companies will exhibit pavilions. The expected number of visitors is said to be approximately 28.2 million, and the city of Osaka expects to generate approximately 2.7 trillion yen in spending through the event. The theme is great, but it is estimated that the venue will cost 235 billion yen. The original cost was 125 billion yen seven years ago, but it is now expected to double due to rising material and construction costs. It's unclear whether corporate sponsorships and ticket revenue will make up for the drastic increase of expenses. I don't hope that there is a large amount of debt remaining after the Expo. Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I also have never stsyed at Lamp Inn in Suzu City, but my son stayed there two years ago with his family. He told me how amazing guests can enjoy its special atmosphere at night. So my wife and I considered to stay the accomodation, but the Inn unfortunately is closed due to the Noto Great Earthquake. Suzu City is still under reconstruction to bounce back from damages and devastation. There is a huge amount of rubbles as a result of house collapse that needs about one year to get removed. Roads are bumping and twisted, and infrastructure is severely damaged particularly water supply system. No one cannot mention when Suzu City will fully recover. However, our prefecture and the Japanese government decided to allocating the special budget to help the people in Suzu City. So the situation is now getting better little by little. Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I understand that I should capitalize every first letter of a title or name. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I mean that living creatures mean all living things such as plants, animals, and humans. I think that they are forced to transform their figures and conditions to survive. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I understand that I should pay attention between singular and plural as well as 3rd person singular. Patients have to spend certain hours to see a doctor despite general malaise when they suffer from sicknesses. Everybody hope to cut down on the waiting time at clinics. AI diagnosis may be effective to shotening the waste of time since it can reduce the number of people who visit doctors by avoiding individuals with minor symptoms from seeing doctors. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak .
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