Dear Teacher Ellie_p, Thank you for your nice comments. Comments you suggested are right. I also read my sentences, but they are contradicted. In this sentence "how important the spirit of religious belief...", I also agree with 'strongly' is much better than 'important'. Thank you very much. Have a nice rest of weekend! Best, Yukibaseball12
Dear Ellie_P Thank you for correcting my work. In addition to that,I appreciate for sharing your experience. I thought again that we have to take care of children carefully. Thank you. Regards Yuji
Thank you very much. I will keep studying English.
Hi Ellie Thank you for your reply. I have learnt same new words from your sentence. They are 'secluded' and 'leisurely' . I like them because they make me imagine the scene vividly. Best
Thank you for correcting!!
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for giving me comments! Taking overcrowded trains makes me tired, but I envy you. Someday, I hope to travel Greece. Have a good day! Best, Yukibaseball12
Hi, Ellie I read the news that Europe will be hit hard by heat wave this year. People will need siestas fairly soon. You already manage your schedule with sieslas. You would be surprised to see how many Japanese salaried workers doze off on a train early in the morning. We are so tired that we cannot help it. If you can luckily find a seat , it is OK. But if not, you have to stand for almost an hour until your destination. OMG Regards, Hiroko
Thank you very much.
Hi Ellie Thank you for your reply. I feel making a English sentence is steel hard, bu I'll continue to make effort. Best,
Thank you for your corrections and messages. To be honest, I hate my nose, but I like myself and can accept as is.
Hi Ellie_P Thank you for your reply. Your alternative sentences always help me understand how native people express in English.
Thank you so much!
Hi, Ellie It is niceto read your comments. I am looking forward to reading it every time I send my assignment. To tell the truth, I didn't like my eyes. THey looked sleepy and small. There were other problems related to that, so I got a double eyelid surgery several months ago. I got clear eyesight now but there is no difference about my appearance. Even though it cost a lot, in my case, I am satisfied with that, because for a long time, I wanted it and finally did it. However, shortly after the surgery, I looked myself in a mirro, It was really scary. Best Regards, Hiroko
Thank you very much!
I am not sure why you could not verbalise what you wanted to ask them. Was it because you felt insecure about your English? Yes, it was.
