Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. In Japan as well, deteriorating water quality is becoming a problem due to illegal dumping of industrial garbage and aging of water supply facilities. Many water sources are located in mountainous areas, but there are a number of incidents where industrial waste is disposed of near the water sources. It is urgently necessary for the police to crackdown on the criminals. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
I wanted to write, "The hero was modeled after the designer of Zero Fighter." like you wrote.
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I am interested in roasted zucchini and will try it with some honey. I am looking forward to enjoying what it tastes like. By the way, yes, absolutely. A fresh avocado tastes like a raw fish but its smell isn't fishy. The freshness with umami in a piece of avocado resembles that of raw fish. In addition, the texture of avocado is really smooth like raw tuna and salmon. Since Japanese prefer eating raw fish very much, avocado becomes one of the popular fruits in Japan. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I see. I could have mentioned some of the other issues that result from economic problems. Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie＿P Thank you for kind words as always. As for 'these countries transform the world's economy into a borderless world', I mean as below. Looking back at history, countries with an abundance of talented young people have gained economic hegemony, such as Japan in the past and China in the present day. Due to their economic influences, the ideas and values of Japan and China are becoming known to the people in the world. Also, more Japanese and Chinese people are going abroad, and the world's borders are becoming smaller than before. I think the same thing will happen in countries like India and Indonesia. Economic development transforms the world into a borderless global economy. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I agree that I will need relatively a long time like a year to get accustomed to a new condition if I move to the country where I have to switch the different type of driving. Getting used to the environment is critical for me not to cause traffic accidents. I am afraid that I may confuse and cause an accident in the new environment. Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I think that life is a pile up of choices. It's best for me and my family to make choices that we think is best at the time. There was recommendation of studying abroad for me, but my father was terminally ill with stomach cancer, so I declined refusing the option. It was a great opportunity, but I have no regrets because I was able to see my father's end of life. I was satisfied with his soothing face at the moment. Life doesn't occasionally go as planned, but I believe that it's convincing for me to choose the best option at the each moment. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback with suggestions to improve my sentences as always!
I checked Goldfinch and saw the images. Their red face is cute! Oriental Greenfinch in Japan is a little close to it.
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. Yes, we have Kyoto in Japan that are overcrowded by tourism besides Tokyo. Kyoto is very famous for a huge number of foreign travellers due to a variety of historical heritages such as shrines, temples, historical places, and beautiful nature. As Kyoto is the ancient capital city of Japan, there are many places that travellers enjoy visiting there. As a result of its popularity, it is common for Kyoto to have overtourism through a year, even in cold winter. Kyoto local government legislated by law to preserve ancient atmosphere, as a result, there are strict difficulty improving road and housing conditions. Even there are heavy traffic congestion, the by law stricltly require individuals and authority to get permission rebuilding roads from independent third organization to preserve historical mood of Kyoto. When an individual ignore the provision and built his house without permission, the authority demolished his newly constructed house since his house didn't fit the atmosphere. This instance shows all the rest. Kyoto has been sustaining the unique atmosphere of old capital, instead there are rampant traffic congengestions and crowd in whole area of Kyoto city. It is common for popular historical places to require visitors to get reservation with expensive entrance fee nowadays. Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. As always, you offered me an alternative phrase for each sentence, which was very helpful! In Japan, a suicide rate is relatively high in Akita, and it is widely believed that its snowy weather and short summer partly cause this phenomenon. This makes me wonder how Finland has overcome its cold weather.
In Japan's mainland, there is one kind of poisonous snake. The most dangerous animal is a bear.
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. Yes, Shikoku dog is one of the dogs that aggressive to strangers. In general, the Shikoku dog is very loyal to its master, but wary of outsiders, making it suitable as a guard dog. It is said that they can be very aggressive towards strangers, even biting them. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I don't think that pitbulls are popular inJapan. In general, people prefer owning dogs that are gentle and lovely such as chihuahua and toy poodle. There are several fierce Japanese dogs like Akita dog and Shikoku dog, but the number of owners who own these dog species are limited because they are very strong and difficult pacifying their excitement. I also like owning a small dog that is cute because it is adorable and gives me a sense of happiness. Now I don't have a pet dog since I don't have spare time to take care of the dog. When I will be retired, I am going to have a small and lovely one to kill the time. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. The woman I know who broke the glass ceiling is Tokyo Governor Miss Yuriko Koike. Tokyo is the capital of Japan, and up until now the governor has always been a man, but she has overturned this social norm. I think that female enpowerment is profitable in society. Given the future that more people enjoy longevity, two bread winners in a household is a beneficial option to maintain household income for good. It is because couples will be able to help each other even if a spouse suffers from serious diseases and gives up working. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
