Dear Ms. Ellie_P, Thank you for correcting my English prose. Your thoughtful suggestions for my sentences are helpful and I am grad to hear your comments to share your experiences for me. How surprised! You have been keeping a diary such a long while. As you said, I realized that it is very therapeutics to write about my feeling on dairy basis. Finally, I would like to use the idiom “to be cut out for” that you taught me, in next journals. Thank you again. I am looking forward to seeing you. Lochness
Your memory is so romantic! It sounds like a movie.
I love pancakes, too!
Ellie先生 Many thanks. >I am opposed to variety shows being reexamined = This sentence structure is new to me. Be opposed to +O+doing is interesting. Thank you. ……… >Since freedom of expression is one of the most basic human rights that is acquired by birth, society has no right to deprive anyone of it. = I understand 'freedom 'goes without an article. 'Deprive' is new to me. It is used with 'of'. I see. ……… >the requirements for the set regulations must be clear-cut and not lead to any misconceptions. = The verb 'lead to ' is useful. I see. 'misconceptions'is new to me. ……… >not clearly defined. = I see 'define 'is a useful verb. >we do not exactly know what 'a comedy out of pain' really is. = I see. This sentence is very understandable, showing me the image. ……… >Given such unclear criteria, every type of comedy would come under scrutiny. = I like this sentence. ……… >there is a fine line between a comedy out of pain and an ethical issue. = The expression 'a fine line 'is new to me. It means that they are so similar that one can easily become the other. I see. ………
Hello Mx. Ellie, I appreciate your advice. The words and sentences you suggested were very helpful for me!
Thank you for correcting my sentences. I think fresh cream and whip cream are the same. But we use the cream that isn't whipped. I'm sorry I can't explain well.
Thank you for your correcting and suggesting my English to natural flow. I have not known this till now, but Mickey's face has been changing every once in a while. You can check on the days, such as 1950's in the U.S. His face is far from the current one.
Thank you for your suggestions and answer to me! I look forward to seeing you next time.
Thank you for checking my work.
Thank you.
I didn't recognize my habit to include two things at once in one sentence. By the way, I used "a carrot of it" as "a reward of the work". Both "carrot" and "it" are abstract, so I have to make my words clearer. Thank you.
Thank you for correcting my essay, and I am sorry for my late reply. I learned a lot from the alternative expressions you taught me. I will try to use these phrases.
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for your feedback and message. Since I have been busy last 2 weeks, I am sorry for this belated reply. I remember that I visited Madrid just 4 years ago. As you mentioned, the weather was very nice. I hope to go there again in a near future. Have a good night! Best regards, Orange0103
Thank you so much. I musunderstanded the usage of the word "because". Your indications and explainations about grammar always make great sense to me.
Thank you for your feedback and corrections with informative tips. This exercise contains unfamiliar situation for me, but good to try to describe the challenging item. Tomoo
