Thank you for your detailed feedback as always. Actually, "Ministry of the Environment" and "heat stroke" came from the problem statement.... anyway, I have to use a correct word on my own, even though there are mistakes in the problem statement, so thank you again for your corrections!
Hi, Ellie. I always appreciate your useful advices. I'm a bit embarrassed that I always make the same mistake relating to articles though;) Thank you so much! Milly
Thank you for your message. Generally speaking, people think works are relating to personality in Japan. Th big difference between Japan and the US including other anglosphere is that if an actor committed an illegal crime, such as illegal drag, theft, bodily injury etc, the previous works cannot be broadcasted any more. On the other hand, in the US, since they are thought differently, the works will be broadcasted without any problem. If Weinstein's works are prohibited to broadcast, that is a huge damage to film industry and film fanatics. This is the only case that is against the Law. Immoral an affair is not included this step because this is not against the law. Yet, since the voice of citizens is becoming greater as SNS, the society have got to keep an eye on people's voice. In neighboring country, Korea, people's voice is much stronger than Law. In another neighboring country, China, people's voice is nothing to the government. Best regards
Thank you very much for your corrections. You are the perfect teacher for me! (..and so I'm happy) Please enjoy your day!
Thank you so much for your correction!! Your correction helps me a lot!
Hi! Thank you for correcting my practice email. I didn't know that I can't use sincerely with the case I don't know their names. Thank you!
Hi teacher Ellie My granpa passed away last September still whenever I visit my granma's house, I feel so sad not to have him on his favorite sofa ! I feel sorry for your loss, too.
Hi thank you for letting me know about Mr Ted Turner ! I will check him out !
Hi teacher Ellie ! I am happy we're both lucky to have supportive and understanding fathers !
Thank you for your message. I don't mind that you could not write back to me and am delighted that just only you mentioned you have read my message. I just met her only twice on the day of shooting film and preview film. Since I just sold the right to film based on my novel to a producer, I don't know whether she even remember me or not. The film is as follows. https://movies.yahoo.co.jp/movie/344304/ Since the taste is so different from other ones, I used a pen name for this novel. Although Nozomi Sasaki is so thin, on the other hand, obese female model and comedian is now got popularity and lasted more than a decade. https://www.instagram.com/watanabenaomi703/?hl=ja By the way, today's essay is about a well known film producer. best regards
Thank you for your message. Since I would like to write some more essay about this topic, I would write two more days continuously from today. The symbol of women's beauty has changed a lot from when Japan's history has got started. About a thousand years ago, obesity is the most beautiful because everyone was starving. This sense of beauty is the same as present north Korea. After this, as you can see the Japan's Earthen figurine, female that has big hips is thought most beautiful because that images give a birth for lots of children. Because in unstable time ,especially during wartime, it is natural that parents lost child. Yet, at present, those kind of beauty is completely out of fashion. Conversely, present beauty is thin. What's more, talkative, bright, wise, sense of humor, and so on.
Thank you very much for your detailed feedback as always, and also for new words like "crystallize". I have not come across this word so far, even though we pronounce "crystal glass" as it is in Japanese(!)...I think this verb is very useful and would like to use it when I come back to the office, finishing maternity leave. As for artists, as I wrote above, it is difficult for them for make a living especially in Japan, but I saw an artist on a TV program, saying that this job is not lucrative but doing something I like is much valuable than money.
Dear Ellie I'm sorry to reply to your message late. Thank you for your correction. You said, “What is your opinion about the riots? Are they justified? ” In my opinion, the riots shouldn't be justified. Because I remembered an idea that an eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind. I thought the riots might make new riots. Wishing you and your friend the best
I appreciate your careful corrections of my confusing writing. In the 2nd sentence, I wanted to say that I caught some feelings of blaming in this subject. Maybe, the writer of this theme has a strong blaming feeling on the officers' behavior, but I think there might be some reasons for such aggressive attitudes.
Thank you for your helpful corrects. And I also appreciate your cheerful comment! Best regards.
