Thank you very much for your revisions and message. If you felt bad about my sentences, I am sorry. Have a terrific day!
Thank you for your detailed feedback as always and you are right: the reform of working practices has become a national commitment since a woman had worked for Dentsu committed a suicide due to overwork.
Thank you for your corrections and paraphrasing. I am trying to write longer sentences, but I have seldom succeeded in it. I have to keep challenging! Sincerely,
Dear Ms Ellie_P, Thank you for your alternate sentences to express my writing more naturally!
Thank you for your reply. I could understand your advice with your kind message. I’ll practice more and get achieve natural English. Best Wishes
Your suggested paraphrase was useful. Thanks a lot. Also, I will try to use correct tense from now on.
Thank you for correcting! Your correction makes me learn how to write a lot. Addition, I will make sure to try less spelling mistakes.
Thank you so much for your correction and teaching me a lot of useful phrases I didn't know. Also, your explanation is so clear and helpful.
Thank you for your prompt and kind review! It is very helpful.
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for your corrections and detailed explanations. They are very helpful and have become hints for next writing! Some topics are hard to tackle, but I want to write as many pieces as I can! Have a nice day. Sincerely, nmkh
Thank you very much
I understood what you pointed out. They were very meaningful for me. Thank you very much always!
Thank you for your support as always. I wish I could write clearer sentences....it was a bit difficult for me to express my idea in formal sentences. What I wanted to say was, the chopsticks and the cover of soup bowl which were served at a luxury Japanese restaurant were wet!! When I saw those things for the first time, I thought they were already used by somebody but it was based on a Japanese traditional manner.
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for your comments. It is a funny story. I have not experienced before such a long time. By the way, I went to trip to Taiwan with my friends yesterday. It took around 3 hours from Tokyo to Taiwan and Taiwan is one of popular places for Japanese. In Taiwan, we ate many Chinese foods such as soup dampling (xiaolongbao) and minced pork rice (luroufan). They were so delicious! Have a nice day! Yukibaseball12
Thank you for your revisions and messages. When I was a kid, my parents allowed me to think freely. I appreciate it very much. Have a nice day!
