Dear teacher Ellie, Thank you for correcting my writing as usual. In the last sentence, as you pointed out I should have wrote "rooms of my house". That's my intention. Thank you for noticing me that. When I visited Seville, we were very impressed with their foods and culture. Since then I often went out to see Flamenco dance when famous dancers came to Japan. What most interested us was their lifestyle. The people took a long lunch time, some of them got a nap. They appeared to enjoy their life much more than our Japanese people did. I really want to visit there and, if possible, I'd love to see you. Best lisbeth
Dear teacher Ellie P, Thank you for correcting my writing. I'm happy to hear you having a great time in Seville. My honeymoon travel was in Seville 23 years ago. I stayed in Hotel Dona Maria 2 nights in Seville, 2 nights in Barcelona, and 1 night in Madrid. I really love Seville. A painting of a bridge of Seville has been on the wall in my living room since then. Reading your comment, I want to visit there again, if possible in Christmas season. Thank you! Best, lisbeth
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for correcting my writing again. Your rewrite is really helpful. Even though I could not memorize all of them, I will read loud them out at least 10 times. BTW thank you for telling me nice words about my diary. I agree with you and your friends on how our body and emotion link and we are influenced by our own thoughts. As you write, I want to see positive sides and keep myself in good mood. Thanks. Best lisbeth
Thank you very much for your corrections and advices. I'm learning a lot from you. Your understanding is right. I wanted to say car "seat" but misspelled. Because the infant car seat is rear-facing, he couldn't look at outside the windows but only could look at the back seats. Now with the new car seat which is forward facing, he can look at outside. I hope that my explanation is clear enough.
Hi Ellie, Thank you for correcting this text and suggesting the additional sentences. I like your "Hours melt into days, and weeks into months in lightning speed" very much. It's beautiful as if I was viewing a picture postcard of a sunset in Agean Sea! I wish I could write like this poetic sentence. Many thanks as always, Kaori
Hi Ellie: Thank you for correcting my English! Sorry, I have been busy on December every year, so I could n't study IDIY. I learned your alternative sentences , I will keep them in my mind. Thank your for your sugestion about 'on here'. I used 'on here' because I would like to link the URL of each other dress. But I would like to use, 'Here,' when I express someday! By the way, I will rest IDIY for a while. When I restart, I would love to work with you! I am going to meet my Japanese friend who came to Japan from Spain. He lives in Spain for about ten years. I look forward to studying with you again. Best regards, Akiko
Hi Ellie: Thank you for correcting my English. I learned nice sentences for a sale. Your English is so elegant! I corrected my blog soon. I am very glad that you could place my blog on your Facebook blog! I also use my Facebook, but I don't know very much about Facebook. Can I see your blog? Have a lovely day. Best regards, Akiko
Dear Teacher Ellie, Thank you for teaching me and answering the questions. I think I understood thank of you. Best, lisbeth
Dear Ellie, Thank you for your correction and kind messages. Your style of correction is different from other teachers. It would be really meaningful lesson for me. I would like to memorize the idioms you suggested, and I hope I could use them freely. Thank you so much. Hope see you soon. Sean
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Hi, Ellie: Thank your very much for correcting my English! My topics are similar, such as fashion. So it really helped me that I learned alternative sentences. Yes, I love cosmetics, too! But I can't many buy them because I purchase clothes... Sometimes, I can try new cosmetics for my job. Your Georgio Armani is so exciting! I have never try it and adore the brand. My blog: https://kimonosnack.blogspot.jp I hope you can add it! Have a lovely weekend. Akiko
I am glad the teacher commented on my essay.
Hi Ellie: Thank you for correcting my English again! The story of your copper color skirt is so wonderful. Metallic color is in, so I think you can get nice tops for going with it. I wish you wear it in many special events! This time, I tried more difficult sentences. You taught me many great sentences. I wrote down my note and corrected on my blog. I look forward to working wit you again. Have a lovely weekend! Akiko
Dear Ellie: Thank you for correcting my English and telling good advice for sorting out. What you just taunt me was very helpful! I would love to use 'sort out' many times. I will read your next correcting soon. Regards, Akiko
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