Thank you for your kind comment. It is very helpful ! I hope I could have good sleep tonight by satying away from my smartphone. But this is difficult for me. . .
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for correcting my writing! As for "inside out" or "upside down", opposite meaning words are used together, so I mistakenly thought it was similar when I want to say "backward". I am just writing a diary to study English, so please don't worry about the delivery date. I look forward to learning more from you again! Best regards, Sae
Thank you for correcting my essay. I love your teaching method which includes a lot of alternative phrases. Ghibli is the most famous anime studio in Japan, so I want Ghibli park to become popular even among people in other countries.
I don't know lotus fruits, but I don't think lotus fruits and persimmons are the same. Persimmons are orange-colored fruits.
Dear Ms. Ellie, I appreciate your advice!
Thank you for correcting my English and your advice. I will check my errors,and would like to improve my English! I will keep practicing English (and drive :) ).
I feel my mother is close to me because of the umbilical cord though she passed away.
Yes, I meant "legalized".
Thank you for suggesting even two examples every time.
Thank you for your work!
In Japan, employees of big companies have high pensions because they can get company pensions in addition to ordinary pensions.
Hi Ellie I didn’t know where is the Avila. I looked it up online. That were amazing places, which has historical castle walls or churches . I felt medieval Europe of atmosphere from some pictures.
Hello, Ellie. How are you doing? I'm so happy to see you here again. Thank you for the amendments you made on my submission. All of them make perfect sense to me. On the top of that, you are kind enough to write me two optional sentences, which are not only providing me other choices of wording and sentence structures, but also, letting me clearly understand what the sentences in my essay mean. You pointed out my word mistake "challenging people." In addition, you wrote me a story about your aunt. Thank you. Bye for now, hoping to see you soon again. Yoko
I intended that "the number of them" meant "the number of cafes". I wrote the confusing sentence. And like you said, the situation of people with mental illnesses is terrible in Japan.
Thank you.
