Thank you very much for your excellent proofreading. I am also very grateful that you were kind enough to point out that my essay did not exactly meet the question. I will examine this point by myself.
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I don’t remember anyone read to me. The culprit must be our parents were too busy to read to run the restaurant. They often worked when my sister and I went to bed. Moreover, my mother prefered making us study to reading to us. We used to study while sitting in the restaurant. Additionally, my father left most of parenting to her.
I am grateful every day for your support. He's given me an good advice. It was neither meat nor kidney meal provided by the veterinarian, it was tuna. When giving it, our dog ate greatly. It was an incredible appetite. Despite having no appetite at all ...
Thank you very much for your excellent proofreading. Your suggestions about my essay from various aspects help my writings improve a lot.
Hello, Ms.Ellie! I might have mixed up the word "volunteer" with "service". Sorry for confusion. About the sentence; "volunteers get to meet people from diverse backgrounds whom they might haven't met otherwise, and get to work together." When I talked to a person who had served in military service (forgot which country in Asia), he told me it was different from being in a university or a company, because he had worked with people from different social class. But that could be just one personal experience. I've actually never been to military service (and perhaps never will), but I might have more chances to meet people who've experienced and hear different stories. :) Thank you, Charcoal
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Thank you very much for your excellent editing. >You could have talked a little more whether you are fascinated or not by the project, even though you speak about it indirectly. The project is really fascinating, because I have intellectual curiosity. However, most scientists have been suffering from a never-ending conflict between their intellectual curiosity and fiscal concern.
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Thank you Ellie, I read and write down to my notebook your wonderful correction and example sentences. yes, ALMA has possibility to find some other planets or universe, so I think it is a romantic project. In my childhood, I want to be an astronaut, so I'm really into this story. Thank you for your correction and have a nice Wednesday!
Thank you for your comment. The word “ lie” is a misspelling of the word “ like”. I wanted to write “ if don’t like it.” But the sentence that you corrected is exactly what I wanted to say. Thank you very much.
Thank you for your correction, Ellie_p. I don't have any plan to buy a automobile, but just imaging and choosing is fun for me. My animal of Chinese zodiac is rabbit, but I don't know the fortune of this year. Japanese culture is affected by Chinese culture, but many of these traditions has lost in China. Many of Chinese tourists are coming to Japan recently, they enjoy Japanese culture and they also enjoy their lost traditional Chinese culture, such as old temples or old pagodas. Have a nice Sunday, and see you next time!
Ellie_P, thank you for your kind correction!
Thank you very much for your excellent proofreading. I will review my mistakes and try to improve my writing.
