Thank you again! See you again soon.
Dear Ellie, Thank you for your comments on my writing. Many people who want to immigrate to Japan assert that they are facing hardships to live in their countries for political reasons even though their actual reason is to seek better lives for an economic perspective. It is true to a certain level that their economically challenged life is caused by the political measures conducted by the current government in their country. However, we cannot regard them as refugees only with this fact because we have a concreate definition of “refugee” of person who are suffered or most likely to be suffered from persecution because of race, religion, or politics. I just wanted to express this idea in my writing within the limited number of characters. I am sorry for confusing you by my halfway and poor explanation. Best regards, Tinkle
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for lots of corrections, advices and ideas for alternatives. I guess I gave you so much work, sorry.... I tried to put much things in such a short sentence, thus I focused on how much I could cut to make it short, that caused me to know my wrong understandings this time. I tried to use participial construction and semicolon, but it seems it didn't work well. (Another teacher also told me that the phrase needed subject) I may ask about these gramatical questions on the next chance. This time, I could find some wrong expressions I have ever used. (e.g. found being pregnant, for going picnic, etc.) I appreciate you for the detailed corrections. Thank you very much! Have a good day to you too. Asouka
I really appreciate you, teacher Ellie-P! You introduced me many other phrases.They are colorful, l like "glowing" for example, and l laughed when l checked the meaning of "bombard" in my dictionary ツ See you soon again!
Thank you very much, Ellie! I learned a lot! kayo
Thank you so much.
Dear Ellie, Thank you for your careful amd detailed comments on and your example sentences in your words for each one very much. From your comments, I recognize my bad habits in writing, and from your examples, I can learn how the natives construct the sentences in order to express the same things. How helpful your comments are! I am looking forward to taking your lessons again! Best regards, Tinkle
Thank you Ellie. Your correction always really stimulative and helpful to learn not only English writing skills, but also learn a lot of things. Always I write down your sentences to my notebook to capture them. Again, thank you and have a nice weekend.
Thank you for your advice. I have a three years old son. So This topic was interested for me. I could learn a lot with your explanation. See you next time.
Thank you for great sentences and telling me the meaning of the sentence I wrote was unclear. I didn't know that. I will check how to use the word 'factor' correctly.
Thank you for your kind and polite correction!
Dear Ellie_P, Thank you very much for correcting my writing. Your explanations are easy understand to me, and alternative phrases are really useful! The tax system started in 2008 to revitalize rural areas, where are suffering from declining of tax revenue, because more and more young people are moving to urban areas. It means that we can pay some amount of tax to the municipality in our hometown instead of were we live. The delicacies I got in the past are fresh fruit, seafood, and so on. I think it is good because the local specialties get a lot of visibility. I'm looking forward to taking your lessons again! Best regards, sae
Thank you for your correction and your comments. Sorry that my sentense isn't clear. Actually, the dough did rise but it didn't become golden-brown. It was still white after 12 minutes passed. Though the color was not golden-brown, it was good and I enjoyed eating the bread.
Thank you for your correction and your comments. Sorry that my sentense isn't clear. Actually, the dough did rise but it didn't become golden-brown. It was still white after 12 minutes passed. Though the color was not golden-brown, it was good and I enjoyed eating the bread.
Thank you for your correction and comments. It was also really helpful to me that you gave me other possible sentences. The book about sweets gives me origins (when and where that sweet started), changes, when it first came to Japan, how it is loved in Japan and in the world nowadays. The sweets picked up in the book are tart, torte, mousse, chocolate, biscuit and so on. It may be better to use "stories" than "history", as you corrected. The book is really interesting!
