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Ellie_P

Ellie_P

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カナダ
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スペイン
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  • ビジネス英語が得意
  • 教員資格を有する
  • アメリカン英語
  • 初心向け
  • ジュニア向け
  • 上級者向け
  • 英検
  • TOEIC
  • TOEFL
  • IELTS
主な取得資格
A B.A in Fine Arts. A TEFL Certificate. A certificate in legal translating.
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I am available 7 days a week.
趣味・好きな国・訪問した国
My hobbies are reading, going out with friends, watching movies and traveling. I grew up in Canada and moved to Greece when I was thirty years old. I have also visited the U.S.A many times. I have visited many countries in Europe. Each country has its own unique beauty. I loved Budapest, Thessaloniki and Madrid. Vancouver and Seattle are also my favorites. Now I live in Madrid, Spain.
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Hi. I have a great deal of respect for people who take their writing seriously. I will respect your writing and try my best to correct it in a way that will benefit you and help you clarify those issues that you need to work on. I believe that words are very powerful and can change our lives as well as the world around us. Therefore, no matter what your writing goal is, my job is to help you reach it. I look forward to reading your work! Sincerely, Ellie
  • fig51979

    fig51979

    Rakuten is a Japanese company which sells various goods online.

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  • 5971mak

    5971mak

    Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. "Furusato Nouzei"( donation to local communities in English) is a system where one can make donations to municipalities of your choice. And on the next year, the government will reduce the donation amount from their tax. So, technically speaking, you are paying your taxes in the form of a donation in advance. As long as the amount reaches the limit of individual deduction, every Japanese worker can do "Furusato Nouzei" in Japan. Take for example, let's assume that you make 4,000,000 yen per annum, which is the average annual salary in Japan. Ignoring any other exemptions, the amount of tax that a person live would have to pay is around 250,000 yen for that year. On this case, they can do "Furusato Nouzei" with about 100,000 yen at maximum. Why the Japanese government implement this generous deduction despite reduction of the tax revenue ? It is because that the government has failed in activating local economy in rural areas due to aging society with low birth rate. Even though the government has invested a lot of money in the countryside before, the business did not succeed. In that case, the government decided that while the government lowers tax, the donors would be able to revitalize the countryside. The donors reduce taxes and receive thank-you gifts from the local government they donated to as a return. The government hoped that Rural municipalities should develop more and more local products to receive more donations, revitalizing their own community in countryside. As aresult, this system can bring win-win relationship between taxpayers and obsoleting countryside communities by gulvanizing local economy. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

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  • fig51979

    fig51979

    I don't know very well, but maybe the bigger the donation the better the gifts.

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  • Tomoofk

    Tomoofk

    Thank you for your feedback and suggestions to improve my sentences!

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  • fig51979

    fig51979

    In Japan, whale meat is sometimes sold, but I never buy it.

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  • fig51979

    fig51979

    No, I rarely throw away food because that is a waste.

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  • fig51979

    fig51979

    I'm sorry, I forgot to write that I heat the egg mixture on the stove. I make it every day when my daughter needs box lunch.

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  • 5971mak

    5971mak

    Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I understand that the expression 'more apt to' means 'more likely'. By the way, I think that the internet has changed circumstances of employees. Before the internet become common, it is difficult for workers to claim their requests and hope without joining labor unions. Once they join labor unions to make your point, subsequently the unions ask them to collaborate expanding the activities of the unions. Many young people feel constrained by the demands of the unions. So workers often avoided union activities. However, as the internet come to real, they can show their opinions and upload their videos on the web. Now, people can freely tell to others what they desire under the anonymity. As a result, people seemed to change their thoughts that they give priority for family responsibility. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

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  • 5971mak

    5971mak

    Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. Since I started reading books, I have learned to be more thoughtful about things. Books teach me things about the world that I don't know. It is not easy for me to learn about the unfamiliar world I don't know. Reading novels allows me to experience a variety of worlds I am unfamiliar with. Take for example "A town where I'm the only one missing" (Boku Dakega Inai Machi in Japanese). This novel is the story of a protagonist who has the power to return to the past. He returns to the past to avoid the tragedy that befalls him and those around him, and it is a mystery in which he fights the tragedy at the fatal risk of his life. The main character is a 10-year-old elementary school boy. A tragedy occurred when his classmate Kayo was murdered. Kayo was abused by her mother and was beaten every day again and again. Noticing this, her homeroom teacher had Kayo take sleeping pills and put her in a freezer to euthanize her in order to save her from suffering. Realizing that something tragic happened to Kayo, the boy went back in time and risked his life to jump into the crisis to realize what happened and save Kayo. Thanks to his help, the teacher's attempts to euthanize her failed many times. The homeroom teacher questioned: Why does the euthanasia fail? Subsequently when he realized that the boy was saving her life. Consequently, the teacher allured the boy to have a cup of coffee with sleeping pills, and put sleeping boy in the passenger seat of a car, and sank the car into a lake. He should have just been killed. By chance, there was a passerby whose car was sinking into the lake rescued him. However, he was a kind of brain dead with deep coma and his doctors declared that he would never come to. However, his mother did not believe doctors' words, and she patiently cared for him alone at her home for the eight years(The mother doesn't get married.) Her mother talked to him every day, played his favorite music, and continued to massage his body every day. This novel is also a novel about the power of love. Love allows you to overcome any difficulties or hardships. This book emphasizes the importance of fighting against fate and the desire to save those you love at all costs. Miraculously, he woke up and remembered what happened before he became deep coma, and reveals who will really be judged. And his homeroom teacher was finally arrested. Non-fiction story actually doesn't go well like this novel. Although some people have commented that the story is too good to be true, the message this book conveys is still powerful. I think that the author of this novel want to convey the power of love that can give individuals the strength to overcome any suffering or hardship. I also believe so. I like Martin Luther's famous quote: "Even if tomorrow the world were to end, today I would plant an apple tree." Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

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  • 5971mak

    5971mak

    Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. At first, I started writting short essays in the IDIY service to pass the EIKEN English proficiency test eight years ago. Once I write my thoughts down, I noticed that it is a fun time and I can feel myself growing. As a result, daily topics of the IDIY have informed a variety of happnings that I am not familiar with. These topics are interesting and informative for me. Therefore, I cannot but continue forming my opinions even now. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

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  • 5971mak

    5971mak

    Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I think technology will change our lives. Don't you think so too? When digital books become available, books will become obsolete, but I think audiobooks will become popular. When I used to read books on paper, my eyes got tired and I could read no more than 10 books a month. However, since I started using audiobooks, I now listen to 30 books a month. As I got used to it, I was able to hear the text with my ears and it resonated with me in the same way as when I was reading it. I think bookstores will disappear, but I think the audiobook business will flourish and new reading style by listening to audiobooks will become commonplace. Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

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  • 5971mak

    5971mak

    Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. Teachers should repeatedly remind students of the rigors and hardships after the onset of their work. In actual work, machines are responsible for performing simple tasks. More and more workers are working in service industries, such as sales, education, and health and welfare jobs. Therefore, students have to acquire the ability of critical thinking and finding answers depending on situations. Tackling difficult challenges will give students the strength to live in the future. Cheating must be stopped to raise their capabilities. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

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  • 5971mak

    5971mak

    Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. Aging is a serious crisis for the Japanese government. The government cannot come up with effective solutions yet. It is said that if this trend continues, Japan's medical and welfare system will definitely collapse. Digitalization of healthcare system is essential to leading to significant savings in healthcare costs and preventing bankruptcy of the social security . Japan, becauseu of the world's oldest nation, seems to be conducting a social experiments of the most elderly country that will be very helpful to other nations. Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

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  • 5971mak

    5971mak

    Teacher Ellie_P Thank you for kind words as always. I understand that I should use "one" at first time. When I was a university student, I visited a fitness gym to work out. However, after I started working, I regularly take a walk in the evening due to a lack of spare time. Although the environment of the training room is comfortable, I don't have a time to go to the gym. Naturally, I changed doing exercise around my residence. It is still enjoyable for me and a good way to say hello to my neighbors. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

    ★★★★★
  • nozomiya0418

    nozomiya0418

    Thank you, as always.

    ★★★★★

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