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Dear Teacher Ellie, Thank for teaching me as usual. Sorry for my poor explanation. Our health care is not free. We have to pay each time when we see a doctor. That is about 20% to 30% of the actual medical cost. And we have to buy medicine, if doctor prescribes. I pay about $170 monthly (about 4% of salary a month) for the health care . The amount of the payment changes accordingly to the income of a person. I'm not sure our health care is superior to Spain's, but I think it is better than many other countries. Best regards, lisbeth
Dear Teacher Ellie, Thank you for correcting my English. As you wrote, our society is very conservative. However there is more people who daringly divorce these days and it's become less stigmatic. Still if you want to escape from the marriage, you have to be independent economically. I think there's still inequality between men and women in the business world. Our society lags behind Western countries by more than 20 years in the area. I also sorry for Princes Masako, who doesn't look happy at all. Best regard, lisbeth
I mean, by 'back office', various administrative works to support front engineers. Thank you for having googled Kazusabori. It is a very economical tool to dig a hole and insert a long pipe to the layer of groundwater.
Dear Teacher Ellie, Thank you for correcting gain. I thought "joe job" means "miscellaneous task". I just wanted to paraphrase "chore". But I looked up a dictionary and found that joe job means has another meaning of what you wrote. I shouldn't use joe job for "chore". Thank you for teaching me. Best regards, lisbeth
Dear teach Ellie, Thank you for correcting my writing. I've been taking painting lessons for more than one year, and I am learning and drawing for years to come. I don't think I am talented, but I can enjoy and concentrate during the time of drawing, which makes me refreshed. I sometimes visit museums when my favorite artist's works are on display. In Spain I went to some famous museums including Prad museum. I was overwhelmed though, it was a good memory. I like the word "carte blanche" . I want to use it soon. Best, lisbeth
Dear teacher Ellie, Thank you for correcting my writing again. I don't think I can fully imagine what living in foreign country as a freelancer is like though, there must be some times you have to endure loneliness. Even though I've been living in my own country with my husband, I sometimes feel alone. I always seek someone I can reveal myself to. So my writing often becomes a bit self-disclosure. I want to be able to explain my feelings in a better way, and I'd love you to correct continuously my writing. Thank you again for some advice. Best, lisbeth
Thank you very much for both editing my composition and proposing alternative sentences. I really appreciate your kindest way of teaching non-native students to learn more useful and natural English writings. By the way, I am also surprised to know that Spain is, as a whole, exceeding Japan in social welfare level. I hope that the benefit of such a high level welfare will be prolonged to the future generations without enlarging financial deficit of Spain.
Dear Teacher Ellie, Thank you for correcting my writing again. And thank you for giving me advice on how to deal with this situation. Not that this is anything new, and she often has same problems with other co-workers. But I have to admit that she has some good characteristics, too, and I also make mistakes time to time. In other words, she is very interesting person. She is now 57 years old, single, having no particular hobbies, having no intimate friends. She has neither a cell phone nor PC at home, so she doesn't have any friends on line. Still, she is always head-up and full of confidence. ( I wonder what the confidence is based on?) By " she is a quite character", I wanted to say that she is odd and very stubborn. I should have written in other way. Thank you again. Best lisbeth
Dear Teacher Ellie, Thank you for correcting my writing again. As you wrote, it was funny when I took part on the conversation between three of us. The brother in law often asked me about my husband, even though we three were on the same table. He is a truly nice person and he and my husband actually gets along with each other. Thank you for some advice on my errors. Best, lisbeth
Hi Ellie P. Thank you for teaching. I learned a lot about tense from your advice. Your answer to my question is very clear. The shop where I found the nice rucksack is far. If I think the rucksack is the best after after checking out other rucksacks, I'll go to the store to examine it throughly before purchasing it. Then I can purchase it in the store. All the best, Oldcar
Your editing and advice are impressive and helpful this time again.Studying natural English is still very difficult for me. Your continued teaching would be appreciated.
Your proposed alternative sentences in addition to the edited ones are always very helpful for me to study writing more natural English. Thank you very much for your kind assistance.
Thank you very much for your great lessons as always. In regards of the flats in Boston, unfortunately I don't think there are many flats with Japanese style bathroom... I've never heard about it. What my Japanese friend is doing is that he bought a shower head through Amazon, even though the buthtub is western style. Plase let me know if you need further information.
