Dear Ms Ellie_P, Thank you for your feedback and alternative sentences!
Choosing "a" or "the" still gives me a headache but I will keep going forward.
Hi Ellie! I ordered the book on Amazon. As soon as I receive it, I will read it. I also believe goodwill,faith and affirmation are very helpful for our mental health and physical well-bing. I send short messages to my clients and even a few sentences make them feel better and ease their mind. That’s why I am so happy to do that. I am so glad you read the article about Ken Shimura. I almost cried when I saw his remains of URN on TV. However, he will be fine and come to life again in the spirit world. Thank you. Keiichi
Today, a Japanese famous comedian passed away due to coronavirus. It has been only 6 days since he was hospitalized. Japanese people, especially the young generation, had been criticized by the rest of the world due to a lack of seriousness to coronavirus, but I think people must have known how dangerous the virus was.
I saw the news that the economic activities are now being prohibited in your country due to the wide-spreading cononavirus. I hope this restriction will not affect you...
I tried to mention the sweets stock clearance campaign, but I'm sorry it didn't work well. This will lead to my next challenge. I call the day when I check the expiration date of sweets and make them a staple food, "Choi-Waru-Day: little badass day". I try not to get too tied up in being a good mother. Thank you for your message. Best regards,
Thank you for correcting my sentence. You are right that I meant cooperation instead of corporation and it was my mistake. I liked the way of saying " I am all for~" and I will use it next time. Thank you.
Thank you very much for your revisions and message! Have a good day!
Hi, Ellie. Thank you very much for your revisions and kind message. I also heard about postponing the Tokyo Olympics last night. I am sometimes confused how to describe "money", because there are some similar words for me, for example, "pay", "salary", "wage". Have a wonderful day!
I didn't know that in Japanese we say scholarship if it is to be paid back or not. Thank you for showing me many different type of writings.
Thank you so much for reviewing my writing. As you say, there is a lot of repetition in my writing and a lack of effective paraphrasing. I will continue my daily studies. Best regards,
Thank you very much.
Thank you so much for your kind response!
Thank you so much. Take care. I hope you will get well soon.
Thank you for your work! I am sorry for the late feedback. I think I need to study more and more, but it is also my pleasure. Best regards,
