Hi teacher Ellie Yes,his passing made me think a lot about discrimination. We shonud stop discrimimating against others but first things first, we need to realize we do that unconciously.
Hi teacher Ellie Thank you for introducing me new expressions and telling me how to use conmas and periods, which I haven't paid attention to much. I really enjoy reading your comments ! Sawa
thank you for your message. although i am sure the racism is not an unquestionable crime, making fake money is also heavy crime. because fake money became common in China, citizens have to use digital money only. If people's will is to change digital money, people are happy to chage it . But the reason to chanege the money from real to digit is too many fake money in the market, it is a reluctant result. Of course, the police officer's action is unacceptable to me. Bet regards.
This topic was sensitive and I hesitate to write my real idea because the teacher correcting my sentence are most from Europe. Also old type of Japanese like me has tendency to not to express real intention directly. However, I haven't heard of Elgin marbles and I learned it by internet and it was very impressing. Thank you.
Thank you very much for your detailed feedback as always and your sentences you wrote for me as alternatives mesmerized me so much! Some Japanese celebrities showed their condolence on this tragedy and sent a message through SNS, something like "this should not happen again". What was interesting is that some agued "Celebrities should not dive deep into this kind of matter. There might be a history that you don't know." As I wrote above, Japan is a homogeneous society, but there are some people who show a nasty, biased view...
thank you for your message. i lived in London 23years ago for 1year and half and had some cockney friends. they taught me many cockney wards such as "shut your north and south"" dog and bone" that was very fun to me. because once I say these words to my friends, they laugh 100 %. but i know i should not use it in business. bye bye.
thank you for your message. the book " men are .." was translated into Japanese. surprisingly, i sold the Japanese translation rights to a Japanese publisher as a literary agent. and the book sold tons of copies in Japan. but i must say the half of essays are acceptable for Japanese readers but not for the others. Because the way of being love, the way of approaching to opposite sex, are not the same. I think that is because of different accumulated customs and religion. But the book is absolutely page turner. I am very very ten times vey happy to have a book title in common.
thank you. yes, i run a literary agency in japan and employee 6 staff. and I have been writing novels also as i wrote before. I used to be a staff of an international literary agency for 5 years and we handled the japanese translation rights of kazuo ishiguro, Tom Crancy etc. But I quieted the company and started my own literary agency 20years ago. but, since i mainly manage the non-fiction writers, i must say authors' agency is more accurate to express my business.
thank you for your message. yes , i am an author , mainly write novels so far. among 9 novels i wrote, 8 became films. one is the following flower and sword / Hollywood report https://www.hollywoodreporter.com/review/flower-sword-hana-ikusa-1016756 hanaikusa trailer https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZICS4OtXGEM and this got the japanese film academy two years ago. and also screenplay writer of films and plays. furthermore, this year , my shakespear's novelized Romeo and juliet was published. https://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/4334951678/
i am terribly sorry for the delay in responding you. i have just realized you message. since i did not expect such a long message saying your opinion as well, I am very happy and that make me motivated to carry on writing essays. best regards
Thank you so much for the message, Ms Ellie.
Thank you very much. I understand my errors and I am happy to learn with you. I will request you again. See you soon.
Thank you for your considerable comment! It is so much helpful for me. Best regards.
Thank you for being informative all the time.
Thank you for your review and advice! As always, your comments and suggestions are very helpful!
