Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for revising my sentences and giving me another example. In particular, I am glad to tell me to express the phrase of “you live only once.” Have a nice weekend! Yukibaseball12
Hi Ellie: Thank you for correcting my composition. I understood about the differences between “trip” and “travel”. Also, your feedback and alternatives were very instructive for me! Thank you very much. Best regards, Evelyn
“Was this her school homework?” Yes, it was.
Dear Ms. Ellie_P, Thank you very much for your corrections and comments. I will keep those in mind. I really appreciate it. Kind Regards, Rokuchan
Thank you for your corrections. Yes, it was a rainy season in July, but now, it is too hot in Japan. I can't live without air conditioners.
Thank you very much. I would like to read the article too.
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Hello. Ms. Elle_P Thank you for your help. As you know, I wrote this story in 2017. It was uncomfortable when I read this story again last month. But I was not nicely rewrite this story. That’s why I try to use IDIY. You said, “I don’t understand what you mean by ‘list’” I will show you It looks like my sweater. Please look at the URL/link. [Contrast-stitch cashmere sweater | Marni | MATCHESFASHION.COM UK](https://www.matchesfashion.com/products/Marni-Contrast-stitch-cashmere-sweater--1281164] You will make sure that. Anyway, thanks again, I will keep writing little by little. My best, Sally2017
Thank you very much for your comments!
Thank you for your corrections. Your explanation was easy to understand, and I enjoyed reading your message. When I go to Toronto or other city of Canada again, I'll let you know :)
It was miso soup!
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Hi, Ellie In Japan, unskilled doctors tried to use an endoscope in order to show off their skills. They sometimes killed patients, because they refused to give up in the middle. If they had accepted advice from other doctors and done just a normal surgery, patients could have been alive. Several lawsuits have been filed against such doctors, however, it is fairly difficult to prove them. I really hope that this new technology will help many patients without casualties. This technology could be a game-changer, if it is used properly. Regards, Hiroko
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for your comments. I understood that you suggested two grammatical mistakes of both parts of 'interested' and 'have been P.P'. Have a nice rest of weekend! Best, Yukibaseball12
