You are totally right. I googled hanami taxi service again and actually user can sprite the bill. So, it will be cheaper if four people share the amount. Thank you for pointing out.
Dear Ellie Thank you very much for your message. I understand the usage of "persons" and "peoples". Thank you!! I checked Avila. It seems to be amazing!! It looks a town surrounded by walls. Country side in Europe is breathtakingly beautiful... I have been to a country side in Portugal (Evora, Alentejo), and I really loved there! I wish we could freely cross the borders and travel around the world as usual before... I am so glad that you get interested in edible insects!! Actually it is not only the way to make our lives sustainable in terms of natural environment. However, I strongly believe that what the earth will look like in the future is the result of our lives. If we fail to realize that our lives are not sustainable for the earth's ecosystem, then the way we, and the generations to come, see the earth will change negatively. To prevent it, I would like to work and live as I wish. Yutaro
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Dear Teacher Ellie san Thank you very much. I understand the following; quote Try not to repeat the same word in the same sentence, like 'might'. Also, you could omit 'might' if it is backed by scientific evidence. 'even in typing' is not bad; you are repeating 'typing'. unquote In addition, quote I guess you are saying that you are typing this diary. So you are saying that your brain is active and alert. Good point. unquote → I am very happy to know that you have grasped what I meant to say. What you guess is right. Thank you. I mean, this text is not a job description or not a job instruction but my personal essay. In this case, a traditional Japanese style is that there are many things better left unsaid. See you again in the writing on the screen.
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Dear Ellie, Thank you for your detailed explanation. I am so happy to be able to learn a lot fom it. When I make English sentence, I tend to use similar expression which I know already. Threfore your newly suggestions are great help for me. Best regards,
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Thank you very much for your kind corrections. ^ the plight of the Indian farmers many times, and about the fact that they do not have control of the seeds many times. →I have not read about the plight of the Indian farmers. However, speaking of seeds, in Japan a revision to the seeds law is being discussed in Diet, against which I am. American Major Seeds Campanies will have the right even in Japan. This revision is based a request from the United States. It is difficult for me to tolk about this issue. ^Money cannot be 'inconsiderate'. →This is an interesting point to me. ^'And' is not so proper here. →I will be careful in using 'And' in the beginning. Also, camma. ^They need knowledge about what? You could expand on this idea a bit more. →Right. Thank you.I will try. ^We can say, 'good enough' but not 'better enough'. →I understand. ^What they need is the freedom and expertise to sell their crops in the market directly by themselves. →expertise is new to me. Thanks.
I totally agree with your opinion. I once lost my job and I felt like I was meaningless in society.
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Dear Ellie, Thank you for sending your message. I understand I should not repeat a synonyms. I'll be carefully this point. Sincerely, Mash Rohut
Dear Ellie, Thank you for sending your message. I read your message now, because I don't know this message system. Thank you very much for correcting my English, I feel your comments are very kindly. Thank you for your continuous support. Best regards, Mash Rohut
Thank you very much for your correction. >Also, try not to repeat 'life', as it drags down your sentence. →It is new to me. I didn't know how strong effect repeating a same word has. >'it might happen' is syntactically wrong. 'it might be that' is an option. →It's new to me. I'll remember this. >'should admit the reality' is wrong grammatically. 'should accept the reality of their' is one correct way. →I'll learn the difference admit and accept, which I was not aware of. >'are not afford' is always 'cannot afford'. If you want to use 'is/are', then you should say, 'is not/are not affordable'. →I didn't know this point. I have been using afford wrongly for a long time. Thank you. >I felt that you did not get into the real issue in-depth, which is the situation with the students who cannot afford the hakama →I confess what you pointed comes to the point. Honestly, the real situation around the students including bullying in the school nowadays has gone too far away beyond my comprehension. Something worth telling with confidence as the practical measures didn't occurred to me.
