Thank you very much for your correction. >Also, try not to repeat 'life', as it drags down your sentence. →It is new to me. I didn't know how strong effect repeating a same word has. >'it might happen' is syntactically wrong. 'it might be that' is an option. →It's new to me. I'll remember this. >'should admit the reality' is wrong grammatically. 'should accept the reality of their' is one correct way. →I'll learn the difference admit and accept, which I was not aware of. >'are not afford' is always 'cannot afford'. If you want to use 'is/are', then you should say, 'is not/are not affordable'. →I didn't know this point. I have been using afford wrongly for a long time. Thank you. >I felt that you did not get into the real issue in-depth, which is the situation with the students who cannot afford the hakama →I confess what you pointed comes to the point. Honestly, the real situation around the students including bullying in the school nowadays has gone too far away beyond my comprehension. Something worth telling with confidence as the practical measures didn't occurred to me.
Thank you for revising! I'm glad that you have the same feeling with me. I wanted to mean "to dive into her" as "to give her a big hug" like you described. Best regards,
Thank you for checking my work.
Dear Ellie, Thank you for your quick response and very helpful message! Sincerely, ot
Hi Ellie, Thank you for your review. I am very happy to hear you agree with my opinion. I learned many alternatives of English witting. I am looking forward to working with you. Ti
Dear Ellie, Thank you for your detailed correction. I learned a lot from it. Also, the options you gave me are really helpful. I am going to memorize them. I would like you to help me again. Thank you so much! Yours Sincerely, Sally
I appreciate your kind corrections. I am very pleased to know that my text was able to get your understandings to some extent, which encourages me for the next time.
Thank you so much Ellie! You’re alternative sentences are very nice and explanations are very helpful! I’m looking forward to future feedback from you. Hikaru
Thank you for your detailed correction and advice.
Thank your for your advice!! It's a wonderful revise. Original my sentences changed much good thanks to you. I studied very much. Now my English is very poor; however, studying English is interesting!! Please revise next essay. Best Regards, Shiro
Thank you for correcting my writing. There were so many mistakes! I'm sorry about taking much your time :( I need to practice over and over. Also I appreciate your cheerful message! Telling stories and playing board games sound very nice and fun. I wanna try them next holiday. Thank you again and I'd like to ask you correct my writing again. Please take good care.
I appreciate your kindness and insightful advise. I got encouraged by your words. I’ve started to write journals to enhance my expressions in English. Your advice helps me to improve my ability.
Dear Ellie teacher Thank you very much for your rationalized remarks. I looked the word 'abrupt' up in the dictionary ,whose meaning I had not known. I understand it's not good to do a jump in logic. I'm sorry I tried to wrap my sentences up with a tempting way this time due to my little allowance of time. Best regards.
Thank you for your wonderful corrections. No problem and please don’t mind your delivery time. I appreciate your explanation about ‘follow the herd’ , which I have understood and will use from now on. ‘The group harmony idea is the way around and against violence.’ I should have written ‘ the other way around’ or ‘ on the contrary’ Best regards
Dear Ellie_P Thank you so much!! I enjoyed reading your corrections. You rephrased sentences, and you demonstrated the big differences. I've never come up with those remarkable choices of words. I like them very much. Also, they proved that the sentences I wrote make sense to make you understand. I'm happy. ”rub them the wrong way” = to annoy someone by the way you behave toward them It is a funny expression and is understandable literally. when it is done in the wrong way, very disturbing. Stay safe and healthy. Spring is just around the corner. Yoko
