Hello Ellie, thank you for the suggestions and examples for my sentences! I l love Middle Ages. I'm happy to read your message.
Thanks Ellie, I'm glad to know that you like Shoen Uemura's paintings too. I love to read your corrections and message.
Thanks for reviewing my writing! Your message is very helpful. I am going to practice writing more and more in order to express clear opinions. See you someday!
Thank you Ellie for your proofreading and suggestion for other way of saying!
Ellie, thank you for your kind words.
Hi, Ellie. Thank you for your adivices! I’m glad to hear you had a good day off! I also looked up Torreladones, and I found the cool watchtower in your new profile photo. That’s a nice picture! In Japan, the cherry blossoms were in full blossom last weekend. So, my friends and I got together under cherry blossoms and enjoyed food and drinks. I felt the coming of spring from viewing cherry blossoms! I meant our roles within society, like job status. I hope you a nice evening!
Hi Ellie, Thank you very for proofreading my writing and suggesting more informative way of saying. I’m so impressed to see how my original writing has turned into such a beautiful one! I didn’t expect to receive such detail suggestions for improvements. Thanks again!
Thank you for your advices, Ms. EIlie! I never knew that there is a possibility of pets’s infection. I have sympathy for your thought. And, your thought will provide relief for them! Have a good weekend!
Thank you for your advices, Ms. Ellie. And, I’m pleased to hear that you looked up my hometown! Wishing you a good evening!
Thankyou for shearing your experience about relationship at work. That's very interesting !!!!
I didn't harvest other pumpkins. My husband threw them into the hole.
Thanks for reviewing my writing! Sorry, My sentences were wrong. I had to use the word, “dairy products” in all sentences, because I discussed milk products. I am going to learn English more and more. See you someday!
Thank you for correcting my sentences. My daughter is studying for Eiken exam.
Dear Teacher Ellie san First and foremost, I appreciate your utmost understanding of my compositions and your kind corrections. Speaking of the definite article, I understand this way: I should put whether things are specific or not before the things appear in front of readers for the first time or not. In other words, I can and should use "the" if the things are specific, although the things show up for the first time to readers in the writing. From the point of the grammar of English, I'm interested in the fact that "quit the policeman" is wrong, and "quit being the policeman " is a better option, in spite of the fact that "quit one's job" is a acceptable collocation. Best regards, ie1133 ---------------
Dear Teacher Ellie san Let me please express in brief my gratitude to you for having understood nicely what I wrote by my corrupted compositions, including "an honest controversy", which you kindly corrected to "honest debate." The sentences in the task are hard for me to realize with real feeling. " The threat to physical safety caused by ---militarized policing against ---people of color." Is there any specific accident in the world? "Young people are rallying behind a global wealth tax to help finance ---safety nets ----" "a global wealth tax"? Is there any system for taxing in the world that is independent from the taxing of each country? Best regards, ie1133 --------------------------
