Hello. Ms. Elle_P Thank you for your help. As you know, I wrote this story in 2017. It was uncomfortable when I read this story again last month. But I was not nicely rewrite this story. That’s why I try to use IDIY. You said, “I don’t understand what you mean by ‘list’” I will show you It looks like my sweater. Please look at the URL/link. [Contrast-stitch cashmere sweater | Marni | MATCHESFASHION.COM UK](https://www.matchesfashion.com/products/Marni-Contrast-stitch-cashmere-sweater--1281164] You will make sure that. Anyway, thanks again, I will keep writing little by little. My best, Sally2017
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Thank you for your corrections. Your explanation was easy to understand, and I enjoyed reading your message. When I go to Toronto or other city of Canada again, I'll let you know :)
It was miso soup!
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Hi, Ellie In Japan, unskilled doctors tried to use an endoscope in order to show off their skills. They sometimes killed patients, because they refused to give up in the middle. If they had accepted advice from other doctors and done just a normal surgery, patients could have been alive. Several lawsuits have been filed against such doctors, however, it is fairly difficult to prove them. I really hope that this new technology will help many patients without casualties. This technology could be a game-changer, if it is used properly. Regards, Hiroko
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for your comments. I understood that you suggested two grammatical mistakes of both parts of 'interested' and 'have been P.P'. Have a nice rest of weekend! Best, Yukibaseball12
Dear Teacher Ellie_p, Thank you for your nice comments. Comments you suggested are right. I also read my sentences, but they are contradicted. In this sentence "how important the spirit of religious belief...", I also agree with 'strongly' is much better than 'important'. Thank you very much. Have a nice rest of weekend! Best, Yukibaseball12
Dear Ellie_P Thank you for correcting my work. In addition to that,I appreciate for sharing your experience. I thought again that we have to take care of children carefully. Thank you. Regards Yuji
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Hi Ellie Thank you for your reply. I have learnt same new words from your sentence. They are 'secluded' and 'leisurely' . I like them because they make me imagine the scene vividly. Best
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Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for giving me comments! Taking overcrowded trains makes me tired, but I envy you. Someday, I hope to travel Greece. Have a good day! Best, Yukibaseball12
Hi, Ellie I read the news that Europe will be hit hard by heat wave this year. People will need siestas fairly soon. You already manage your schedule with sieslas. You would be surprised to see how many Japanese salaried workers doze off on a train early in the morning. We are so tired that we cannot help it. If you can luckily find a seat , it is OK. But if not, you have to stand for almost an hour until your destination. OMG Regards, Hiroko
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