So much corrections you gave helped me to understand my mistake. Also Each two example sentences broadened my vocabulary. I was very glad when I see you choiced ‘proper equipment’ for one of example sentences. Because I also came up with the phrase for a sentence but used other one. ‘Culprit’ you mentioned is the right word I wanted to put in my sentences when I was writing. This is my first time to use idiy, it’s very fun to learn from natives like you. Thank you for your correction.
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for replying to me. I've been to Sapporo twice and there's a lot of fresh seafoods and beautiful natural landscape. In winter, a lot of snow falls although it is super cold. I hope you will visit there someday. Have a good day! Best, Yukibaseball12
It was unlucky. Come to think of it, that could become a good memory for your trip. Thank you for your corrections!
Dear Ellie Thank you for your corrections. Your alternative sentences were so helpful. I was moved by your story about your warm relationship with your neighbor. I sincerely appreciate your courteous cooperation. yoshiko2019
Hi Ellie, Thank you so much for your corrections. I appreciate your inputs. By the way, as for "I think you no longer live there, right?", I have been living in San Diego, though I am going back to Japan next year. Here, we have had nice weather lately. Have a good evening! Best, Masa
Thank you as always for taking the time to carefully correct my writing.
Hi Ellie, thank you for your message. As you mentioned, in the Netherlands, most people can speak English so I don't have any trouble with daily life. I have to, but I'm not learning Dutch... Anyway, I really appreciate your work and detailed organized comments. You are absolutely right, the comma splice is one of the difficult grammatical things for me, but I believe I can improve my expression because of daily practice. Thanks again!
Thank you very much! Your sentences are very helpful for me. I hope I will be able to chat with my foreign friends in English very often. Have a wonderful day!
Great feedback! Thanks
Dear Teacher Ellie, Thank you for your nice comments. And, I always appreciate that some other expressions are added, even when my sentence is perfect. Have a nice day! Best, Yukibaseball12
Thank you so much for feedback. The way you correct my writing is really helpful!!
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for your nice comments. I also agree with your opinion. I am glad to learn "Puffing off" which is the new phrase for me because I always use 'smoking' instead of the phrase. Have a nice weekend, too! Best, Yukibaseball12
Thank you for improving my sentence. getting my condition is no problem, because I want to write some topics referenced to health. That's why the topics I am going to image of writing. please check out my comments. I am very grateful to improve my sentence accurately. thank you. bye
Thank you!!
Dear Teacher Ellie_P, Thank you for your comments. I always forget adding comma before conjunction such as because. I will care for it from now on. Have a nice day! Best, Yukibaseball12
