Thank you for your helpful comment! I think I should have used the word "spoil" instead of "abolish." How do you think about it? Best regards,
Thank you very much, as always!
Dear Ellie Thank you very much for your corrections based on my structured sentences and for making some new sentences with the natural flow like natives. I understand your recommendation and I use these expressions to further improve my English. I hope to learn from you again soon. Sincerely, Bearmatsu
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for your feedback. I have been to Madrid in March and September for vacation and business respectively, but it was colder than Japan. I think there are bigger temperature differences in a year in Madrid than in Tokyo. However, since the rainy season ended two weeks ago, I have been getting tired of continuing hot and humid days, around 33 degrees. At last, Tokyo Olympics has started yesterday and I saw the opening ceremony on TV. Many Japanese people saw the games and ceremonies on TV because they are big entertainment during the COVID-19, though they are against having Olympics. In addition, many companies are hesitant to join it publically because it may ruin the company's brand. As a result, in my opinion, including various considerations and lacks of preparation, the opening ceremony was simple as never before. You have experience volunteering in a retirement home and know the suitable words. My grandmother is now in a senior care home but I could not meet her for over three years due to the COVID-19. Please take care of yourself during the extremely hot weather! Best regards, Orange0103
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you always give many examples!
Dear Ellie, Thank you very much for your feedback. Also, I am sorry for this belated reply since I had a test for a generalist of Deep Leaning, which is quite difficult for me. Thanks to your explanation, I understand well how to use a comma correctly. At last, Tokyo Olympics will be held on this Friday. We are instructed to work from home during the Olympics by the government. If I could travel abroad now, I would like to go to Sicily and Sardinia. I would spend a relaxed time enjoying the sunset over the beautiful sea and the Idyllic countryside. Delicious foods like seafood, fresh cheese, and raw ham and wine would be fine. I hope you enjoy your vacation! Best regards, Orange0103
Hi Ellie_P Thank you for your corrections. They are very helpful. I learn a lot every time. I woke up by the chirping of cicada this morning. It's hot and humid. I 'd like to try the siesta soon. Have a lovely day! Best, Keiko23
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments.It was good to know how to use 'so that'. The Japanese rainy season is over and it's getting hotter and hotter. We have to be careful about heat stroke. Take care and have a nice day.
Your correction is always superb and I am very confident that you are the best teacher in IDIY.
Thank you very much for your useful advices!
Thank you so much! I learned a lot this time too; especially, 'have a blast' is so cool.
Dear Teacher Ellie san Thank you very much for your quick answer. I see the figurative meaning of "pig". And I will try to use "while " correctly and effectively. The rainy season in Japan has been lifted up in Tokyo district. The sunshine here is as strong as in Spain, I think. Best Regards,
Thank you very much! I really learned a lot from the revised text. I was amazed at how much I could learn from the English that was heavily modified based on my own writing. Moreover, there was a version of the original English that was corrected, and I am grateful for the service. I would definitely ask you to do it again. (It's a little long, so I translated it with deepl lol)
Thank you for your message. Your message helped me study English in more detail and it will help me keep my motivation to study English. I will make an effort to write correct sentences and I will send you my work again. Kind regards, Nicky
Thank you so much for the corrections and suggestions. They were very helpful. I thank you for your comments as well. There are some disasters due to heavy rain every year in Japan and I feel very sad.
