Hi Ellie: Thank you for your corrections and message, I am fully agree with your thoughts about the reality of the U.S economy. Comma splice is a little bit difficult grammar for me, so I will learn more to understand it. Your feedback is always easy to understand, so I can learn a lot from you. Thank you all the time. Have a nice day! Best regards, Ryozy
Thank you for your advices, Ms. Ellie. I mistook “social” for “society”. This was a careless mistake. I wanted to write that “the total amount of one’s salary is proportional to how much he brings benefits to society”.
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Hi Ellie: Thank you for your corrections and message. Thanks to your indication, I could understand the difference of use between 'few' and 'little'. Although it is little bit difficult for me to distinguish a word countable or uncountable correctly, I will try to improve my understanding. Thank you all the time. It is great sunny day today in Hokkaido. I wish you have a nice day! Best regards, Ryozy
Thanks for reviewing my writing! Your suggestions and message are always very helpful and encourages me. I am very happy. See you someday!
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I like to watch the snow falling out of the window, too!
Hello,Ellie. How are you doing? Thank you for the corrections you made on my essay. All of the amendments make a perfect sense to me, and furthermore, the alternative sentences and the advice are helpful for my study, thank you. It's a beautiful day today here with beautiful blue sky and brisk air. In my yard roses have many buds and they will be blooming soon. As I live in the northern area of Japan, flower season comes a bit later than others but flowers last longer because of the cool weather. This is my favorite season of the year. I hope to see you soon again. Bye for now. Yoko
Hi Ellie: Thank you for your corrections and message. You let me notice careless mistakes of my writing, Thank you all the time! I'll try to improve my skill. Your tips also help me to make my writing more dramatic, I would like to use them well. I hope you have a nice day! Please take care about a high temperature. Best regards, Ryozy
Thank you very much.
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Thank you, Ellie. I look forward to receiving your comments every time.
Thank you, Ellie. I really enjoyed reading your comment!
Thanks for reviewing my writing! Taking your advice, I am going to practice writing more and more. See you someday.
Hi, Ellie Thank you for your correction of my writing. I was taking about plastic packaging waste on a per capita, but USA was the top and Japan was the second. I'm sorry it didn't make sense well. I appreciate you that you showed me natural sentences in your way. But I could not disappointingly find the verb of " the key " in the following sentence. It was too difficult for me... " The key to reducing this amount involved being accountable, which applies not only to each person but also mostly to companies that need to stop or reduce the amount of plastic they put into the market and think in terms of repairing and reusing instead." Other than that, overall, I caught a lot of new vocabulary and expressions from you. Thank you. Yukiko
