Hello, David. Thank you for your revision! I am glad there is nothing needs to be changed^^
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean the word “ powdery.”
Thank you for your work!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean the good phrase “ came out from around the counter.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean “a” is necessary before hard time like “ a hard time.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean the phrase “ where the bed is.”
Thank you for your kindly suggestion.
Thank you for your useful feedback with encouraging comments!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean it’s better to say “ the time” rather than “time” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean it’s better to say “ ended up wasting that time” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean “the past” is better than “ the present perfect” in the first sentence.
Is a “ closing prayer” a natural English?
Thank you for your feedback with suggestions for more natural explanations!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean “the day’s work” is better than “ today’s work” in the first sentence.
My apologies for the late reply. Thank you for your suggestions and explanations. Your feedback is really helpful. I look forward to taking your lesson again.