Thank you very much for your review and pointing out some mistakes. Also, suggestsing alternative ways that I would like to express is also very helpful. Tommy,
Thank you for your quick reply. I wonder if it is not necessary to say "across" like the other way "across" the one way, which I thought would be more understandable.
Hi David, Thank you for correcting this essay. Although I never hope for my family's illnesses, this is a good practice for me to write medical things in English. I will try to express various matters in English! Many thanks as always, Kaori
Thank you for your quick edition. I like it. I am sorry that I missed the word " knife." You must have been confused. You are right that she wielded "a knife."
Hi David, Thank you for correcting this essay and suggesting a lot of additional sentences! Regarding the second sentence, I quickly couldn't decide on the tense. Thank you for your clarification. I now understood it. Have a lovely Monday! Many thanks as always, Kaori
Thank you for your quick response to my English essay. I like it. Alothough you wrote "your question sounded natural" in the comment, did you refer to " Was it beneficial for me or did I waste money?"
Hello David, Thank you for your quick response and good advice! I keep trying to improve my English skills. I am looking forward to having your comments again. Have a nice weekend! Kaoru
Thank you so much for pointing out a lot which are absolutely useful for me to correct my English. See you next time. Have a good day.
Hi David, Thank you for correcting this essay and offering many alternatives! I like your "My computer is showing its age lately." Writing about computers is a big challenge for me because I don't know its terminology. I'll write about them again if I have another chance. Many thanks as always, Kaori
Thank you for correcting my essay. I wonder if you use " turn up" even when you make the air warmer.
Hi David, Thank you for correcting this essay and offering the alternatives. I will continuously write about various things such as the weather! Have a lovely Tuesday! Many thanks as always, Kaori
Thank you for correcting my English. I wonder if you have the same experiance as that I have experienced: receiving emails which name is similar to your friend.
Hi David, Thank you for correcting this essay and suggesting many additional sentences. I especially like your "of two minds about." I will definitely use it when I have a chance. Have a great Saturday! Many thanks as always, Kaori
Thank you for reading and correcting my work. I've learned a lot from what you pointed out. During the correction, I found lots of points that I need to revise. Additionally you made a summary as a last message letting me remind those. It's really comprehensive and easily memorize in the way you did. Thank you so much. See you next time.
Thank you. I understand your message.
