Dear David, Thank you for all your feedbacks and answer of my questions. I was able to easily imagine of diference between "contain" and "include". Beside on this, I found that "X include Y" is without "in" ,thanks to your comments. I also have mistook that it's not "bergen" ,but "bargain". And I'm pleased to hear of Canada's big sales day "Boxing day". It's first time to hear of the 26th day in Canada. Knowing other country's custom would be great help for me to learning English more widely. Best regards, Okd2016
Happy new year!
Dear Teacher David, I really appreciate your feedbacks. All your feedbacks help me understanding what natural sentences are. Especially, I have had some phrases to express correctly and precisely. Beside this, I was very surprised to see that you used Japanese "は" in your answer of my question. That works very very effectively for me to learn about specific parse "As for". I would like to thank you for all your considerate coaching in this year. Okd2016
David san, Thank you for your detailed explanations and many tips. Take care of cold weather in Canada. See you soon. Tommy,
Thank you.
I am on a train, going to play golf at the foot of Mt. Fuji with my friends. I have read your editited sentences and encouraging guidance with joy. Thank you so much!
Hello David! Thank you for correcting my diary. I was surprised your response was so fast! You're wonderful. Actually, I can't understand when a wore need an article. So your support is very helpful for me. Thank you very much. Thank you for reading. See you soon.:)
Thank you for correcting my diary, David! I was happy when you told me, 'That app sounds helpful and very interesting!' Yeah, I believe that I'm gong to get high score of TOEIC if I know a lot of English words. I'll do my best!! Thank you very much! See you soon!:)
Hello David, Thank you for correcting my English in a very nice way. That became an extremely useful resource for me!
Hi David-san, Thank you for your thoughtful comments as always. Thank you so much for praising my English that arouses my enthusiasm. See you soon. Tommy,
Hello David! Thank you for correcting my diary. Actually, I can't understand between 'as' and 'when' in this case but I'm glad 'when' is natural in this case. Thank you. I'm going to work as night shift. Have a great week, too!:)
Hello David! Thank you for correcting my diary! Ah, Tokyo changes 'that city' in this case, I was impressive. I guess if 'the city', someone maybe won't understand 'my city' or 'Tokyo'. I see. Thank you for reading! See you soon!:)
Thank you for your revewing. Writing an essay is beneficial for me not only learning English but also thinking about many interesting topics one more time. Thank you as always. Tommy,
I am impressed to read your comment on the 4th sentence of my work. The expression of your 2nd option is closer to what I want to say. Thank you very much for special kindness.
Hi, David-san, Thank you for your corrections as always. After I wrote an essay, I felt I would like to try virtual reality in the near future. Arigatougozaimashita. See you. Tommy,
