I am happy that the teacher commented on my essay.
I would like to thank you for your prompt and kind correction given my composition.
Hello, David-sensei! Thank you for correcting my English and I'm very happy that you love 'The Nightmare Before Christmas'! Thank you for your lots of comment! Happy Walloween! I'm glad because you give me a lot of more natural sentences. I'll writen a good English about 'wear'next time.:) I was surprised that people uses the word 'monster' when they want to say about vampires. The reason... I thought 'monster' is a video game word.X) Thank you very much! Have a great week, too!
Dear teacher David, Thank you very much for your feedback. I always appreciate your abundant useful options and explanations. Best regards, Okd2016
Thank you very much again, David I learn many useful grammars from my many mistakes! Everything is important for me. I should make efforts to become familiar with more natural English. For example, "Singapore boasts very clean streets" is the correct sentence. I made a mistake the subject "the cleanliness of Singapore's townscape" by conceiving in Japanese. I think it will take a long time to write English by conceiving in English. Thank you. I hope you have a great week!
Hello David, Thank you for checking my diary! Your comment about preposition is really helpful! Thank you☆
Thank you very much for careful correcting again. The difference between singular or plural is there so much that the meaning change, isn't there?! I appreciate that you see how my sentences are taken.You help much improve a sense of English wording. Also, You clearly answered what I thought to have a question, but I didn't, about singular or plural ( figures less than a full second). It is interesting! Thank you. Best regards,
Thank you for correcting my composition again. I made some serious grammatical mistakes, for example I wrote the sentences which it sounds like "good health" is aware and "they are rarely aware when they are aware." I really like an optional expression, "People often take their health for granted." Besides, it is good that I can learn an accurate definition of "elite". The word "elite" is used with varying a little from the real meaning in Japan. For example, "Elites" is the word which indicate even the excellent employees of a leading company or the students of a leading university. The irrelevance to the original meaning of this kind is too common to enumerate. Best regards,
Hello teacher, I have learned a lot of words and grammer from your advises in this time. All your feedback inspire me to broaden my English vocabulary and grammar. Thank you for your teaching.
Hello Teacher, I always appreciate your abundant penetrating feedbacks. Particular your options are really effective to improve my English skills. For example, what I wrote "Westernization was leading" has options; The Japanese economy was deeply affected xxx or, Westernization had a big impact on the Japanese economy xxx. I also surprised to see the rule of "a, an": a European and a university. Thank you so much for all your feedbacks.
日本語でしか感想は書けませんのでよろしくお願いします。丁寧により自然な英語に直してくれた。ただ一箇所だけどうしてより良い表現なのか分からなかった。お手軽添削では仕方がないのかもしれない。David 先生からのメッセージの文の量も多く分かりやすい英語で楽しかった。
Thank you, David! I'm compretely satisfied your correction, in addition, your options are so helpful. I'm looking forward to next chance to see you.
Dear David, I'd really appreciate to your feedbacks. Those definitely helps me to improve my English writing skill. I always learn many things related English by your explanations and options, and you always get my essentially intention. Again, thank you for your excellent coaching. Best regards,
Thank you so much for your comment, David I'm happy to hear that you like beluga too. You once dressed as a beluga for Halloween when you were a child! I wanted to look at that figure.:) In Canada, there are a lot of chances to look at them. How nice! Happily, there are them in Japan too. After entrance exams, I'll go to see them. I can only watch cute them on the youtube for the present. I hope you have a great day. Best regards,
