Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn to use the present tense after “see” like I saw our seniors play “ Deep Purple.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s be there to use “the present perfect” after “ I will be sure …” in the last sentence like “I will be sure how fast I have become at remembering it.”
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “ hard work” without the indefinite article “ a.”
Dear David, Thanks again for the useful advice and examples. Last week, two coworkers were out of influenza, so I I picked up the slack. This is a real story! Have a great weekend and take care of yourself. Ebiharumaki
Thank you for all the examples! I am going to ask you to check my answer this year.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that my composition is almost perfect.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ studies” in the plural in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ a car actually belongs to a coworker or not in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ regret not doing.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “groupwork” is a one word.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ after that…”in the last sentence.
Dear Teacher David san Thank you. I appreciate your kind advice. "the luxury items are composed of rights (as if the rights are an ingredient within the items themselves)." # I see. What I wrote was odd. I should have written" The rights include taking our favorite items as one of its contents." "Note that "favorite" is usually used with a possessive because this adjective indicates a personal connection." # I see. It interests me very much. "The expression "have (something) at your disposal" means it's available to you and you can use it. This is mainly used with things like information and money," #I see. I have found that "disposal" is often used around waste matters. "The tobacco tax has proven that taxing a product can lead to reduced consumption." "The tobacco tax has been proven effective." "has been a great success." # I love these expressions,for they are simple and easy to understand. "To indicate that we're speculating about that hypothetical situation, I used "if + past, then conditional" # I forgot to use this standard formula. I will keep it in mind. "to use the word order "consume the item less," with "less" after the object. In this case, "less" feels like it's connected to the verb rather than the object:" # I see. It seems me an adverb. Besides these, there are a lot of tips for compositions you kindly extended,which I appreciate. Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that I have learned it’s better to say “ the clothes.”
Hello David, I'm so happy to read your alternations on my submission. They are exactly what I wanted to write but I couldn't. I want to be able to write like you. Thank you so much. Hope to see you soon. Bye for now. Yoko
