Hello, David. How are you doing? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. I'm happy to read your nice comments. Your corrections all make perfect sense to me. I think it might sound stupid, but I have been getting more superstitious than when I was younger. I sincerely hope Setsubunn gives me a good luck. I hope you will have another good year as well, David. Take care! Kind regards, Yoko
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the present tense is better in the last sentence like the price is 4 times as high as when I started smoking.
Hello, I appreciate your advice! Have a nice weekend. Best regards, Mashroom
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ I am gradually becoming able to see…”in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the phrase “ other than my mother made.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn you say “CDs.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the phrase “ in such a short time.”
I appreciate your advice. Have a nice day. Best regards Mashroom
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the progressive is better in the first sentence like …was giving them away…”
Thank you for your feedback with suggestions that I found helpful!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the phrase “ ride on.”
Sorry for my delayed message. I appreciate your advice. Have a lovely week. Best regards, Mashrom
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn pizza toast has no article.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ all the electricity was restored” in the last sentence.
Thank you, as always.
