Hello David! Thank you for correcting my diary! Ah, Tokyo changes 'that city' in this case, I was impressive. I guess if 'the city', someone maybe won't understand 'my city' or 'Tokyo'. I see. Thank you for reading! See you soon!:)
Thank you for your revewing. Writing an essay is beneficial for me not only learning English but also thinking about many interesting topics one more time. Thank you as always. Tommy,
I am impressed to read your comment on the 4th sentence of my work. The expression of your 2nd option is closer to what I want to say. Thank you very much for special kindness.
Hi, David-san, Thank you for your corrections as always. After I wrote an essay, I felt I would like to try virtual reality in the near future. Arigatougozaimashita. See you. Tommy,
I am grateful for your quick and deliberate fixing on my sentences!
Hi, David-san, Thank you again for your corrections. How to use comma and semi comma to separate sentences properly is still troublesome for me. Anyway, I keep in mind that persistence pays off, because I am a learner. See you.
I am glad the teacher commented on my esssay.
Hi, David-san. Thank you for your corrections again and explanation as well. I believe that practice makes perfect and it is beneficial to proofread my writing by native spearks. See you. Arigatougozaimashita.
Thank you very much!
Thank you for you modifications. My sentence became more natural. Arigatougozaimashita.
Thank you for the complimants! I haven't reviewed the texts fixed by you these days, even though I request you to work on my paper on a regular basis. I'm sorry not to reply you so soon!
I am glad the teacher commented on my essay.
Thank you! I learned that I need to be more careful with articles.
Thank you very much, David I understand the subtle difference of nuances between "I think it is good not to try to stop hiccups." and "I think it's good not to do this". Your explain is enough to make me understand it. Thanks. Furthermore, thanks to your suggestions about what my sentence from "If I had to say 〜" means, I can call what I wrote to mind. I was almost fall off my chair sitting to laugh at that funny circumstance. Thank you: ) See you again!
I appreciate your kind correction. Your recommended phrase was really helpful for me. Have a nice week!