Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say“ among hills” in the fourth sentence.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say“ the other church members.”
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences were very useful!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ the azaleas” is better in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the better expression like “ my weight would drop below….”
Thank you so much for checking my writing, David san. Your comment pointing out which phrases sounded natural was very encouraging as I’ve never had a chance to have my writings checked this way!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ one of the good old days” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ a different view from her about that story”in that story.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ event” is better than scene in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that my composition was almost perfect.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ the solitary deaths” in the plural.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the first sentence should be in the progressive like “ things are not going smoothly…”
Thank you for your super fast edition.
