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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the present tense is better than the past tense like “I found out Israel is far worse than Hamas” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say” trying to show off.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the present is better than the progress like “the guts come out of their bodies.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn no articles with “world history.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say” delinquent boys threatened to hurt me” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to see my composition is almost perfect.
Hi, David, Thank you for the very quick response.I learnt many things from your correction. "Card" is a countable noun, so, it should use "few" instead of "less". I hope you have a great day. See you next time. Yoko
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “ made an excuse” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “ the breaker turned off.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the phrase “ exchange something for something.”
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Thank you for your feedback. You have polished my sentences.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ valid” rather than “validated.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ whenever I remembered these things.”
