Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ grew out” in the first sentence.
Thank you as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ 18l of kerosene .”
Thank you for correcting my writing! I am going to take a IDIY's pass, so I may request you again. I'll leave it you then.
Dear David, Thank you for your kind changes to my sentences. Because you always give some tips to write English compositions, I can register new vocabulary every time. I will try to express my thought in English to expand my knowledge. Sincerely, Bearmatsu
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ the actual studying” in the first sentence.
Hello, David. How are you? Thank you for the quick response and corrections you made on my essay. I am happy to read your nice message, too. I always check dictionaries to choose a word. But, it's hard for me to find a right one. Thank you. I hope to see you soon again. Kind regards. Yoko
Hi David, Thank you for your review! In the fourth sentence, I think some hills sound the best as you said. I appreciate that you taught the difference between lean about vs lean using lots of examples! I’ll keep it in my mind to use them! I look forward to asking you to check my composition and get other alternatives :) Have a great weekend! Best regards, Kohei
Hello David, Thank you for your feedback! In the second sentence, I wanted to refer to both of my hand and smartphone. Anyway, I didn’t know the nuance that SETTLE has, and how to describe the sign things are helpful when I talk about my travel. Besides, there are attractive alternatives that I wanna make my own! I like the moment your advice broadens my English world! I’m looking forward to reading your other feedback more. Best regards, Kohei
Hello David, Thank you for your review! The phrase that I wanted to use in sentence 2 was absolute “skyline”. Besides, I believe there are lots of hints that improve my English skill more, such as “from the window of the car”, “ how to use the highway” and so on. I really appreciate your concise and naturally-based-more-than-grammatically-correct explanation! I’m looking forward to reading your other feedback. Best regards, Kohei
Thank you for your work!!!
Hello David, Thank you for your feedback! I’m really happy to hear that my writing skills continued to be impressive. Your feedback really helps me a lot. This time, I really appreciate the explanation about SEE and how to make the sentence using When and that kind of verbs. What’s more, most Japanese people are struggling to understand the differences between seeing, looking and watching and how to use them correctly, but I feel my understanding of it got much deeper now. By the way, FYI, I used the other account named yamashitamadair, but I’m gonna use this account only. I’m looking forward to asking you to check other compositions as always. Have a great weekend! Best wishes, Kohei
Hello David, Thank you for reviewing my composition and giving me detailed explanations! I especially fun to know the nuance of holding vs putting and balancing. It makes sense :) Your review is always concise and easy to understand! I look forward to asking you to check my next composition! Best wishes, Kohei
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ a fellow belieber” and “!exchange the days.”
Hello David, Thank you for your detailed review and alternatives as always! I particularly appreciate the explanation of past/after and look like/seem using your alternatives. I wasn't sure if I made these sentences correctly, but I feel I can make it out confidently. Sorry for the super late reply because I was swamped with lots of things to do. I look forward to asking you to review my other writings. Have a great one! Best regards, Kohei
