
Hi David, Thank you for correcting this essay and suggesting many alternatives! Additionally, I appreciate your clarification about the word "so" in line 7, because it's difficult to learn such a subtle feeling from the dictionary. It's good to know that you're enjoying nice weather in Vancouver. Hopefully, I'll be able to cope with this heat and humidity. Have a lovely Friday! Many thanks, Kaori

Thank you so much for correcting my sentences and teaching me useful expressions.

Thank you for your quick responce. I am glad to know the word " flattened."

Thank you so much for correcting my English!

Thank you for your quick responce. I do not understand which is more common, carp or carps in your edited comment.

Thank you for correcting my sentences and teaching me more natural expressions.

Thank you for your edition. I wonder if you know a combination of shampoo and conditioner. You do not call rinse. Instead you call it conditioner, don't you?

Thank you so much for correcting my sentences and answering my questions. I'm so glad to understand what I wanted to. I will be careful not to make the same mistakes. Thank you!

Thank you for your responce. I wanted to know the expression to make the aircodioner cool: is it to say " turn down or the aircondioner?

Thank you for your correction! Your explanations are very helpful. Many thanks as always. Kanako

I'm so glad to learn many useful expressions from you. Thank you!

Thank you very much for collecting my writing and your helpful comments. I read writing you changed and I thought this was what I wanted to mean. Thank you!

Thank you for your quick responce. I am glad to find out native speakers of English say " my station" or "my destination."

Thank you for your quick responce. I wondered if I could call it "pencil", although it is a "mechanical pencil", to be exact.

Thank you so much!