Thank you for your super fast edition. In the last sentence, after colon, “ there are “ Is necessary like there are iPhone-stands everywhere here and there in my rooms.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am sorry I made a mistake in the third sentence : that she was wearing a tight skirt, not shirt. But it is okay as the sentence does not make a big difference.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ a long time” is better than “ many times” in the fourth sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the last if-sentence should be in the present.”
Dear David san I have found that "Pay off " has a lot of meanings. "Perseverance pays off." is new to me. This means if something you do pays off, it is successful or has a good result. I knew only this one: to pay someone their wages and tell them they no longer have a job. Other than this, here comes :to give someone all the money you owe them, and :to pay someone not to say anything about something illegal. It is hard for me to understand the last one. Thank you for your informative corrections. Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ overcome the temptation.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ A lot of my friends were already playing…” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your feedback and corrections to improve my sentences as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it should be “ in a long time.”
Thank you for your fast edition.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the correct spelling “ PET bottle.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say” …roses were growing…”
Thank you, as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the phrase “ go volunteer.”
I can clearly understand the difference in usage between this and that. Thanks David!
